[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2008 9:07:53 PM Title: MAN HUNT!!!
Awww! you STILL havn't updated it! T_T you make me sad! ideas huh? lets see.....brain movements comencing......
kagome and sesshoumaru go to court, there are arguments, a little bloodshed, and lots of evil humor
court happens, it is mostly boring, yada yada, but you focus mainly on whats happening at kagome's house with bank, jak and kyo. Jak tortures kyo into telling some of what happened during the northern take over and stuff.....
do a mix of above mentioned ideas......
have the court be boring like courts usually are, but have something like an atack on kagome in the middle, or one of kagome's friends bust in saying somethings happened and that she's needed right away. then another friend like sango or kanna is injured badly because they had gone to help bank, and jak try to fix her house, but they were out getting stuff, and they found someone in the house breaking stuff and looking for the dagger and or mirror.
Just throwing some ideas out there, i may review again and add some. T_T i dont care, but i would love to see an update soon!!!
geillmon@yahoo.com
~Liz~
Date: 18 Dec 2007 6:07:29 PM Title: Confessions of a Confused Heart
realy good so fare cant wate for an update
Date: 12 Nov 2007 9:01:04 PM Title: Confessions of a Confused Heart
this is getting good.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2007 1:01:41 AM Title: DON'T GO!
I like this story as it kind of ties some past stuff. I would like to see a little flashback as the past is kind of muddled between the two. However, I do like how this is rolling.
As a note, I am removing all extra excerpts/ omake from fanfics. Please only include a chapter note or end note. No side conversations from the story. It takes away from the story and wastes space. This is something that is in the news archive of this site that I have stated about a month ago. Thanks!
Date: 29 Aug 2007 7:16:54 PM Title: Dinner at the Tashio's
You should add another chapter.It was gud
Date: 12 Aug 2007 10:52:23 PM Title: New Agent, New Author
Thanks! Peace out.
~TH~
Date: 12 Aug 2007 5:40:34 PM Title: New Agent, New Author
GREAT JOB LOVED IT!!!