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Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 2:39:14 PM Title: Chapter 2-"The Surpirse"

please continue. it's a good story.

Author's Response: oh ok- thank u i will, and thankx again for reading my first story!^-^!

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2009 1:01:38 AM Title: Chapter 2-"The Surpirse"

I think it's really good but I am wondering if your thinking of gold when you put the carots in because a 24 carot diamond would be huge the link is for one that is 13.34 carots. Sorry I love the chaptet I'm just having some problems with the diamond size. http://www.brilliance.com/diamonds/Search/ViewDetails.aspx?id=15807190&styleID=&SN=BSN0000796852

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2009 3:20:26 AM Title: Chapter 1- "The News"

I can't wait for chapter 2, good work.

Author's Response: Hey thanks a lot- dont worry im making more!^-^!

Reviewer: inuyashakagomematesforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2009 8:03:01 PM Title: Chapter 1- "The News"

Hi update pleaz!Dosent my name say enoff?

Author's Response: ok ok thanks guys!^-^! im gona update it today!^-^! dont worry- this one is a good one!^-^! thankx again!^-^!

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