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Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2009 9:48:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

god i love Naraku in this story i mean i love the dark evil naraku and all but the responsible stuffy but learning to relax one is so adorable and yes i know Naraku is NOT adorable but he is to me lol

Author's Response: You don't have to defend yourslef abot thinking Naraku is adorable. Just ask Pita Bread what I think about Naraku. If anyone knows how much I love that dark bastard; it's her! Thanks for reading; much love. Keva

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2009 5:25:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh, I was almost a bit mournful about no ass whippings. However, I wonder after Sesshoumaru recovers from his hangover if he will continue his shenanigans or Naraku make him go away.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2009 5:18:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Haha... Sesshoumaru is finally acting like a real idiot! This is a real low for him and he cannot even hold his liquor! lol

Reviewer: KogasWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2009 6:13:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ooooohh....

Reviewer: Vampiremaiden21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2009 12:33:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!

rolling on floor laughing my apples out!!!!!

that was so funny!!!!

i love it when sessy is drunk!!!!

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2009 9:17:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

poor naraku

Reviewer: KogasWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2009 11:08:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

I definitely like Kei. He reminds me of my OC Moranaka, but I haven't figured out if I want to post any of the stories with her just yet, should probably think on posting updates to the stories I have. lol. Love the story

 

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2009 4:00:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

Uh oh, what with Kei do?

Kagome inherited everything...wow!

Reviewer: KogasWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2009 6:47:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

Ooh... i love it the suspense is killing me lol :D i love this story and I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Sweet_Dark_Silence Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2009 3:22:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

You are soo bad!

I hope Kei dosen't get his ass handed to him. 

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2009 7:43:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

Sesshoumaru better grow up and accept his feelings. Lying is suppose to be below him.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2009 3:01:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

Kei seems a bit strange... walking into another's home like you own it is something I find a bit creepy. However, as usual, I am here for the long haul. ;)

Reviewer: marie53 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2009 4:10:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

hi this is really good i so cant wait for the next chapter thanks i want to c wat sessomoru will do now

Reviewer: InuAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2009 10:28:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

I think adding another male to the pot would shake Sesshy up a lot.  Add your new character, but make him flawed or wanted by the cops or something.  I'm sorry I didn't mean to tell you what to do with your character.  I love the love hate relationship between Narku and Sesshy it's funny.  Narku like in the show is good at mind games, excellently written.  I can almost see the look on Sesshy's face at all that Narku told him.  BRAVO!  I know I don't review often, but you don't need me to keep telling you what an obviously great story you have and how much I enjoy it every single chapter.  I am really enjoying it, the only problem you take to long to update!  Well, maybe you don't I'm just impatient, I've been working on that flaw for many years now, not working thinking of looking into a support group, but I don't have the patients to search for one.  Go figure.  Excellent story, very well written. Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2009 8:27:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

as always Keva excellent writing hope Kei is moving in hehehe get Ses a bit jealous maybe or protective or both as Naraku would say...ku ku ku!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2009 2:25:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

Naraku is one hell of a guy... despite matching Sesshoumaru in cruelty, he is a sneaky bastard! Haha! :)

I am fine with any new characters. I am so happy to see you posting a new chapter. I will try to return it and update some of my own.

Reviewer: daretodreamlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2009 1:23:22 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ehehe, I like it. It's sad that Sesshomaru has to be a jerk, but I've got to tell you.. I'm loving Naraku in this story! :D

Reviewer: daretodreamlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2009 12:59:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh! I think you should most definitely bring him in! :D

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2009 4:36:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

oh yes would love to see Kei if Naraku can push Ses's buttons Kei is sure to blow them up lmao !!!!

Reviewer: Sweet_Dark_Silence Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2009 9:46:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh God! I can't wait to see how this backfires in his face!

Reviewer: TheThirdSister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2009 1:11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story!

You know what?

There's probably a ton more people on InuYasha-Fiction.com that will read and review this.

I am giving you my strong  advice to make an account on www.InuYasha-Fiction.com but, just a fair warning if you decide to join and post this story up, I'm going to warn you to ignore Shitto{Kimi/Kelly}. Strong advice to ignore her.

I don't know if you have an account on InuFic, but if you don't, post this up there!

I know a lot of people on there who I think would really like it!

Even if you don't get reviews right away it's because people don't log on as much as they used to, but still, it's more active than this site by far.

Hope you join us at www.Inuyasha-fiction.com! {You're the first to get my advice to join!}

Loved the story!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support and I am glad you enjoy it so much. I will consider joining another site but with modding and posting on this site, aff.net, ff.net, mediaminer, and dokuga it's getting really hard to keep track of them all. I will keep it in mind though.

And no worries about someone who is a thorn in author's asses. I dealt with the writing justice (although that's not what they are called any more) on ff.net and sufficently shut them up and they were by far the worst I have ever come across.

Oh well. Thanks for reading. Much love. Keva

Reviewer: foxyblueangel2010 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2009 1:37:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hey this is a great chapter update soon. ^_^

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2009 6:47:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

Sesshoumaru can denie himself he wants....lol

Reviewer: Ruby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2009 10:05:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved this chapter

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2009 3:34:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

Naraku figured Sesshoumaru out...Izayoi is a crafty woman... and Toga...well, he just likes to sit back and watch...lol

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