Date: 15 Nov 2008 11:13:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chuckle, laugh, chuckle. If the rest of the story is as funny as the first chapter, you've got a winner here. I'm especially glad you're keeping them as youkai and made Kagome into a kick-ass female. I agree with Kei, they do make a 'cute' couple. Kei sounds like a hottie, too. Maybe she has another female friend to match him with as payback.