Summary: Haiku (urban haiku) on Kagome's unrequited love.
Categories: Poetry, Angst/ Drama Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 149 Read: 2128
Published: 19 Aug 2007 Updated: 19 Aug 2007
Story Notes:
I do not own Inu Yasha. That goes to Rumiko Takahashi.
She Will Be Numb by Taiyoukai_Nile
Author's Notes:
Urban Haiku: Has the 5-7-5 line status, but does not follow traditional haikus in which involve nature as the subject.
Always gruff and crude
Rarely a moment for love
She sighed longingly
She knew she loved him
She willingly stayed him
He loved another
The rare instances
When his golden eyes saw her
She knew the reason
She was a copy
Of the one he truly loved
It was heartbreaking
He always compared
And then her heart would break more
Tears hidden from view
Never good enough
It was like a gauntlet run
The words far more worse
Her love infallible
She knew she was a poor fool
But she did not care
She watched them embrace
She watched them share words of love
She watched them always
Again, she cared not
She became numb to the scenes
And numb to herself
The other was dead
Just a pile of hardened clay
But he still loved her
Unrequited love
She would always know that tune
And be numb always
End Notes:
Kind of angsty, but I knew the feeling at one point in my own life.
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