Inuyasha loves kagome. But what happens when kagome doesn't love him back? what if she loves a certin demon lord? what happens when the demon lord loves her back??? Okay people i am in deprate need of your help!!
This story does have potential, but what I'm confused about is how does Inuyasha slash at the walls of his prison if he's tied up and unable to move? And how does he get thrown across the room, knocking him unconscious? Did the new couple enter the room? And where are Shippou and Kirara during all of this? You have to put more in your chapters. They're way too short. I'd love to see what you do for the next chapter. I can't wait. ^_^
Oh, you have got to write a sequel to this. I know there will be pups by Sesshy and Kagome. I want to see what happens with Inuyasha, now that he has no chance with Kagome. Here's an evil thought: have him mate with Kouga. Just a thought. ^_^
