Penname: hanah1223 [Contact] Real name: Hanah Cavalier
Member Since: 12 Jun 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I am from Washington D.C, love Inuyasha to death and I should be posting my first story soon :-)
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Dance to The Melody by lust1203 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

This is Melody's first year of High School, her whole life revolves around dancing, dancing is the only way she can accept the fact that her biological mother traded her for a hit of crack when she was a baby. Her foster brothers and best friend are the only ones she can completely trust with her life. What happens when she falls on her big night? What does she keep seeing thats scaring the hell out of her? Will Melody be chosen to be dance captain or her rival? What happens when she finds out that her premonitions are causing her to lose her eye sight? Who's the handsome devil who walks into her life making her feel complete? Will he shatter her into a million pieces like all the others or will she be different?


Categories: Angst/ Drama, Romance, Romance > Other
Characters: Custom
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32312 Read Count: 484
[Report This] Published: 22 May 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: hanah1223 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is a fantastic story!!!! I really liked how you anaged to make Melody's emotion feel real, and I love jakotsu! This high school scenario is very different from others this is ver well written :) I hope you continue can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thanks! I try to make the characters seem as real as possible and I'll be updating as soon as possible thanks for youre very kind review :) 

Beyond The Gate by lust1203 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 

 A crossover of the FullMetal Alchemist Brotherhood and Inuyasha, What happens when Ed, Al, Val, and Greed find out what the other side of the gate is? They're in for a rude awakening when they become seperated from eachother only to be attacked by Naraku's Incarnations and Homunculi. What happens when Valencia reunites with her friends who have been traveling with Inuyasha and co. only to find out that she's been traveling with their sworn enemies after being nursed back to health after Wrath's and Kimblee's attack? Oh boy sounds like drama XD Characters : Edward and Alphonse Elric, Valencia, Greed, Kimblee, Pride, Envy, Wrath, Gluttoney, Sloth, Ling, Inuyasha and Co. Band of Seven Naraku and co.


Categories: Romance, Humor, Crossover, Angst/ Drama, Action/ Adventure
Characters: Custom
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51962 Read Count: 2042
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2011 Updated: 06 Nov 2011
Reviewer: hanah1223 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm starting to really enjoy reading you're fanfiction :) Keep writing, this first chapter was really good, now I'm might just start watching the fullmetal alchemist :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I apologize for responding so late, Graduation process has just been pure chaos, I really enjoy the show maybe you would too, I wanted to do something different and I thought it would be cool if the other side of the gate was fuedal Japan. I ope you continue to enjoy my fanfiction just as much as I enjoy to write them:)

 

Reviewer: hanah1223 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 

So Val is dead? wow didn't see that coming 



Author's Response: Lol you'll have to find out in chapter seven =)

Reviewer: hanah1223 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Whoa that was really good! Can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thanks :) I hope you keep enjoying this story thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: hanah1223 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! This chapter was worth the wait, I'm glad they're finally reunited and you have a great flow to this story! update or else -.-

Author's Response: Ha lol i will i promise and thank you for the compliment it means a lot too me :-)

Reviewer: hanah1223 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great job once again ;) wow that was a nice twist you gave about her father, I didn't expect that, awesome :D

 



Author's Response: Thanks, I hope my readers would like it, I just hope that other readers like Valencia and don't think she's to strong, she's simply a tomboy. Thanks for your review :-)