Amaterasu, ruler of the heavens, has asked for an experiment to be made by the god Izanagi, Lord of life. When it works and the experiment goes to earth, what will happen?
OK, just want to point out...the 'tails' around the Inu's shoulders are not tails but in fact a chinese styled kimono.
Author's Response: There is a reason why they call it a fanfic. Its your own story. I can make the 'tails' tails or the 'chinese styled kimono.' But I like to use imagination...
OK, I honestly don't get this story at all. Inuyasha mates-so does Sesshomaru...UHG! Huge headache, oh well...its your story after all.
This was the very first BanXKag I have found ever (I usually read SessXKag or InuXKag) and Bankotsu has been, and will always be, my favorite character from inuyasha. I'm so glad there is someone out there that writes GOOD BanXKag (or OC).
If you don't mind InuXKag, you should really check out Danarose31383, she is really a good writer, and she does have lemons. (if you like that thing) . She does have an account on this site, but she moved to a diffrent site so she does not have her best stories on here. Just google Danarose31382, and you'll find her. I'll list some of her longer stories.
-The Past To Come
-A Mermaid's Tale
-Open Your Heart To Me (my favorite)
-I'm A Slave For You
She has 73 stories, and I recomend you should read them. ^.^
This is Melody's first year of High School, her whole life revolves around dancing, dancing is the only way she can accept the fact that her biological mother traded her for a hit of crack when she was a baby. Her foster brothers and best friend are the only ones she can completely trust with her life. What happens when she falls on her big night? What does she keep seeing thats scaring the hell out of her? Will Melody be chosen to be dance captain or her rival? What happens when she finds out that her premonitions are causing her to lose her eye sight? Who's the handsome devil who walks into her life making her feel complete? Will he shatter her into a million pieces like all the others or will she be different?
I have seen this story on another site before and loved it. I'm glad you posted it here,
is this your first story?
wow, that was very..diffrent from what I usually read.
I liked it. I don't usually read oneshots, but this definatly changed my mind. :)
gosh, such a wonderful story and no reviews. ^.^
This fan fiction site is really very shy on reviewing, don't you think?
I love the plot, and I will keep reading on. I'm just going to quickly point out one thing I noticed in this chapter that kind of bother and confused me.
You put the sentence in third person, and in first perosn. It doesn't really make sense when you put it in bith. So if I were you I would stick to third person. It seems most readers like it that way.
Example:
First Person: I felt like throwing up.
Third Person: Kagome felt like throwing up.
Hope it helped, and I look forward to the next chapter! ^.^
Nice job. I love this chapter. Please update soon! ^.^
I like it, please continue. ^.^
