Reviews For The mystery of the purple eyes
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Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:05:52 AM Title: Chapter 1:down the river, kanade's the name





Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:05:52 AM Title: Chapter 1:down the river, kanade's the name
You should use capitalization. It would be a little easier to read if you do. Also there is some word repeat and tense errors. Sorry I only point this out to help, not to be offensive or anything of the sort.
Its a good story so keep writing! xxoo