Reviews For Gone
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Reviewer: PitaBread Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2009 3:16:19 AM Title: Gone

This is great, but isn't 'closed' one syllable?  If I'm wrong, then I'm sorry, but otherwise, that means there's only 4 syllables in that last line...

Reviewer: RebelliousHanyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2009 2:15:11 PM Title: Gone

Short, but very, very good (and sad).  I love poetry, and this one was very well written.  Keep it up!

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