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Reviewer: _rainstorm rikku_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2009 6:15:05 PM Title: SessKag Citrus

i really like it but in your first line you have 6 syllables and in the second you have 6 also. Striped is two, and so is against. while flesh and moans are both one syllable. sorry :(

Author's Response: You're right!  TToTT   I shall fix...

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