Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:48:52 PM Title: Life in the feudal era (part one)
you finally got another chapter up!!! :D :D :D im so happy! i really like this fanfic its really good so far! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sorry it took so long to update, I probably won't update again for another mouth but I promise to get the next chapter up soon!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2010 11:23:40 PM Title: Return of an old enemy
write more please!!!!!!!! i really want to read the next chapter!!!!!!! really exiting :D
Sorry I haven't undated yet, I lost my password and the new ones don't seem to work, but i'm going try to update some time this week.
And thanks for reviewing!!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:34:18 AM Title: Return of an old enemy
wow... that is awesome... how will sesshomaru get out?
Author's Response: Thanks for for reviewing! you won't see sesshomaru for the next two chapters but he does return we're going to be geting into the main part of the story.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:24:03 PM Title: Return of an old enemy
The dialogue was formatted better in chapter when compared to the first. You seem to have a decent idea for a story, but I would really like to see more detail. I don't have a very clear image of the setting or the custom characters, and it is hard to sympathize with a character you don't know all too well. However, I like it, and I would like to see chapter three when its up.
Author's Response: I know what you mean i'm not the best when it comes to details, but i'm going to try to add more detail in the next chapters
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:21:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
This isn't bad. It's quite short, but length does always signify quality. I would also highly suggest that you make a new paragraph every time another character has dialogue. It is much easier to read and understand who is speaking that way. All in all, not bad and I am interested in the second chapter.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:48:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
i really liked the first chapter. i am writing my first fanfic too and this chapter is way better than mine is.mine was really short but i really like yours. update soon so i can read the next chapter. i really want to find out what happens. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the support! i'm hoping to update some time next week, but don't qoute me, and good luck with your story I can't wait to read it.