
Date: 24 Apr 2013 8:56:35 PM Title: Pup Vs Parents
I am enjoying parts of this story...but there a lot of parts I don't understand...if she was worried about her kids why was she dickin around with Sango and Kikio? She wasted time for no reason...I don't understand and all the filler like goin shopping when she needed to find her kids...was just stupid...it doesn't matter how many words a story has...if its good its good...if its not its not...ya know?

Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:24:45 AM Title: Pup Vs Parents
I am enjoying parts of this story...but there a lot of parts I don't understand...if she was worried about her kids why was she dickin around with Sango and Kikio? She wasted time for no reason...I don't understand and all the filler like goin shopping when she needed to find her kids...was just stupid...it doesn't matter how many words a story has...if its good its good...if its not its not...ya know?