Date: 22 Jun 2008 12:44:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
New alternate way of Kagome going to the past...I'm not the grammar monkey or anything but your story was a little hard to follow because some sentences weren't complete and a few spellings were off....but I still like it.
Date: 21 Jun 2008 7:09:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting way to get Kagome down the well and into the past. There are a fair number of spelling and grammar errrors though, it makes the story a bit hard to follow in some areas. I'm interested to see where the Inu brothers take Kagome (they get along?) and what happens. :)