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Reviewer: imagecentral10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 9:23:10 AM Title: Those Words

This was a good story. I would've liked more detail. I'm a sucker for extremely vivid stories.

I would personally love to see an epilogue showing where they go from here. And I only want those on stories that I really, really like.

Reviewer: Dark_Author Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2008 8:17:40 PM Title: Those Words

Good!  I noticed a few run-on sentences, but other than that, nothing at all was wrong.  And there are a couple of typos...namely this Õ  appears in a couple of places where it shouldn't. 

On the whole, very good!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I went and corrected the typos. 

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