Date: 20 Jul 2012 9:23:10 AM Title: Those Words
This was a good story. I would've liked more detail. I'm a sucker for extremely vivid stories.
I would personally love to see an epilogue showing where they go from here. And I only want those on stories that I really, really like.
Date: 11 Aug 2008 8:17:40 PM Title: Those Words
Good! I noticed a few run-on sentences, but other than that, nothing at all was wrong. And there are a couple of typos...namely this Õ appears in a couple of places where it shouldn't.
On the whole, very good!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I went and corrected the typos.