Date: 25 Aug 2008 9:39:55 PM Title: A Glimmer In The Darkness
I like that you had Sesshoumaru help Inuyasha out. They really need to work on their relationship, but I think it would work out. I like the touch about Kagome killing Shippou for disturbing them at the end, that was funny.
As the manga neared the end, InuYasha and Sesshomaru did more or less work for a common goal of destroying Naraku. At one point, Sesshomaru actually saved his life, so it didn't seem like this scenario would be all that far-fetched. they may not be the best of friends, but they did manage to get along more or less before it was all over.
And it's about time that Kagome discipline Shippou rather than letting him get away with murder all of the time.
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.