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Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2008 1:59:01 AM Title: Making A Decision

Wow! Kagome is such a horny woman! Give up one... for me I would have both if I could. ;)

Reviewer: UtterChaos247 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2008 9:45:43 PM Title: Making A Decision

I read Naraku's one first, and figured 'what the hay' so I read this one.  One thing you need for this chapter is to show who's who, I couldn't tell if that was Naraku or Sesshoumaru just at that last paragraph.  Add on a few sentences throughout the chapter and it'll be all clear.  *^_^*

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