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Reviewer: lover_of_inuyasha_n_kagome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2009 6:49:28 PM Title: Changes of the Hearts

WoW...tHiS Is sO dAmN GoOd!!...i lOvE ThIs!!!

Reviewer: Akayasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2009 3:26:40 PM Title: Changes of the Hearts

I love this story and yes I'm tired of your late updates but as we all know "we can't rush perfection"

Reviewer: lover_of_inuyasha_n_kagome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2009 12:10:20 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise

u kno i LOVE this ...PLease UPDATE soon!!

Reviewer: Akayasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2009 1:20:05 PM Title: A Competitor, A Confession

I love this story and glad that you updated it but when life throws you lemons, you make lemonade. Please update soon.

Reviewer: lover_of_inuyasha_n_kagome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2009 11:41:52 PM Title: A Competitor, A Confession

i LOVE it!!!

Reviewer: lover_of_inuyasha_n_kagome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2009 10:11:27 PM Title: A Competitor, A Confession

I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY...PLEASE CONTINUE!!!

Reviewer: lover_of_inuyasha_n_kagome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2009 5:35:13 AM Title: First Official Kiss

i love this story...please continue it...its 2 good not 2 finish

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2009 9:47:20 AM Title: A Competitor, A Confession

poor kagome that is no way to wake up in the hospital. but go bankotsu! for thinking of a way to hook thoes two up. i like the chapter and i hope to read more soon:)

~Write on!

Reviewer: gurlieracing Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2009 7:02:46 PM Title: The Innocent Prank

I love this story!!!! PLEZZZZZ write more!!! I wanna know who that guy is and Sesshoumaru's reaction!

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2009 11:11:29 AM Title: Hope

Wow..... now I'm really confused. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter that might explain all of this....

~Mika

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2009 5:15:55 AM Title: Who?!

A boyfriend? Wow... what a turn of events!

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2009 8:23:28 PM Title: Who?!

WHAT THE HELLL???????? WOW KEEP GOING I CANT WAIT

Reviewer: Akayasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2009 3:32:21 PM Title: The Punishment

This was a great chapter. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Akayasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2009 8:14:38 PM Title: Cold Sweat

What a great story/ I love the toilet cleaning cloth. I've never laughed so hard.

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2009 9:32:32 PM Title: The Punishment

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next. Update soon. :)

~Mika

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2009 1:30:33 AM Title: First Official Kiss

What a way to change her mind.

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2009 9:22:08 PM Title: The Punishment

thats sweet i hope they get to gether and i hope inuyahsa gets whats comming to him. i swear he is an ass

Reviewer: kimakaanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2009 7:17:13 PM Title: Hope

i really like this story!! please continue lolz!! i hope kags and sesshy end up together soon!! sesshomaru's always trying to deny and run away from his feelings!! we all know there's love and compassion in that ice box he calls a heart!! thanks for creating!!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 3:51:43 AM Title: Cold Sweat

ROFL... toilet seat cleaning cloth!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 3:45:09 AM Title: The Innocent Prank

Pranks do not always go as planned... I wonder who started the fire.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 3:27:09 AM Title: Kanna

I cannot believe she would tackle the challenge... what a brave girl!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 3:19:37 AM Title: First Day

Have you actually known a waitress to make $30/ hour. Most waitresses make below minimum wage per hour (a couple years ago it was only $2.90 per hour plus tips) and plus tips, but also have to give 10% of tips to the house. At least some restaurants do that.

The only way she could seem to be making tips is a waitress or a bartender in a popular club. When I was growing up, the mother of one of my best friends made $500 a night and only worked 3 days a week as a bartender in a bar in downtown St. Louis.

Just giving you an idea. For $30 an hour, she would have to have a sturdy degree under her belt or as I said, be a waitress or bartender in a popular club.

I know this is your story, but the figures for it are not plausible figures even in an AU story built on real world situations.

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Regardless of wages earned, bills and such... it is still good. :)

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 2:58:47 AM Title: Bankotsu

Sesshoumaru is really sadistic. I find it odd to see Bankotsu be nice, but he does have this quirkyness to him that screams "I can be nice although I am a bad boy." lol

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 2:52:28 AM Title: Sesshoumaru

Very good... minor part in water bills. Usually a normal household is under $60 a month for water and trash bills. At least from my personal experience. I do believe it would not be much different even if it were Tokyo Japan. Most people end up going to public bath houses and pay very little.

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I am still hanging in here. I like it. :)

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 2:49:30 AM Title: Hope

$59,000 or yen??? That is a lot per month... usually even schools in other countries do per semester. Some of the minor colleges are $16,000 a year here in the U.S.

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Plot wise, I think this is a very good start.

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