[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2008 5:11:40 AM Title: Tests
I am thoroughly your story and can't wait for the rest of it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 5:16:13 AM Title: Tests
ummm question...... doesn't Kikyo still have the shards I didn't see where Kags got the bottle with them in it back?
Author's Response: Nope. Right after Kagome says "it's not in your hand..." Kikyou tosses the shards back to her. I'm not going to forget a detail like that, though I guess I could have made it more obvious.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 5:09:45 AM Title: Tests
Very nice portrayal... no explanation needed on her friends... real friends are always concerned, but not overly so.
I like the cat and water play. lol...and it was a nice little scene for InuYasha to get a peek...lol
I like the route of the pure soul. Just because she is youkai and a miko, does not mean she muddied her soul. She is still Kagome all the same... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews. You're the only person consistently reviewing on this site, so I appreciate it.