Reviews For Metamorphosis
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Reviewer: Simmer_Dee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2009 1:21:23 AM Title: Finding (Trouble)

awesome story =D update soon

Reviewer: MissVampira Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2009 1:51:38 AM Title: Out in the Open

.....there sexual tension if frustrating me....love this by the way

Author's Response: Good to hear.  Keep reading and your patience will be rewarded...eventually. 

Reviewer: Eluwei Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2009 12:05:15 AM Title: Sangeki

Very well written as always.  It was a bit harsh but life is.  Losing a child like that makes you feel as if your soul has been torn out.  I hope you don't have to go through that pain.  I also hope that Inuyasha realizes what an idiot he's being by leaving her like this.  THey need each other more than ever now.

It was good.  I was very glad to see the update I look forward to them.  I shall await more.

Till later,

Eluwei



Author's Response:

Yes, I imagine popular opinion is not high on Inuyasha right now, and I don't blame it.  We've seen this before from him; when danger strikes, he locks onto physical safety without considering the other emotional and psychological consequences of his actions.  Glad you liked it.  I will try not to leave the story hanging here for too long. 

Reviewer: KEdakumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2009 7:45:07 AM Title: ...And Conquer, Part 2

What a great twist.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Inumimi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2009 7:09:10 PM Title: ...And Conquer, Part 1

Another great chapter - thank you!

Reviewer: BriarAndFrivolity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2009 12:23:33 AM Title: Divide...

Is the next chapter "And Conquer?" because that would b an awesome play on words and u would become a very funny person in my mind = D (do i get a cookie??)

Reviewer: cyphon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2009 8:11:44 PM Title: Settling Her Debt

Every one loves earning money instead of spending it. Especially me. Anyway, good story.

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2009 7:13:21 AM Title: A Return to Action

I only have one word that is leaking from my open mouth....WOW. Gods, that is one of the best lemony lemons I have every read! You must have put so much time to prepare such a great chapter, and it it pays off! Again, very awesome and very well written! :)

Reviewer: cutelittleears Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2009 3:34:59 AM Title: A Return to Action

All i can say is yummy,yummy, and, yummy. :)

Reviewer: Suniko Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2009 1:34:27 AM Title: A Return to Action

Amazing!! You did an AWESOME job! WHOA very HOT indeed! That was… well awesome! I’m stuck on that word right now. :P I’m sorry I haven’t been leaving a review every time I read the new chapter. But I do come to this site everyday looking for the new update of this story. You write it so well that I can’t get enough of it. After all this story is AWESOME ;p lol. Keep up the great work!

 

Suniko

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2009 1:11:10 AM Title: A Return to Action

I love it! I absolutely loved this lemon! Congratulations on being a featured fic! You definitely deserve it! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2009 4:52:36 PM Title: Settling Her Debt

please continue i know, i say that a lolt, but i don't know what else to say.

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2009 4:06:19 AM Title: Settling Her Debt

Excellent chapter! I love the part where Shippo says how they make sweet sweet love. LOL! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2009 12:23:34 PM Title: New Beginnings

Finally! We get our lemon! YAY!!!!!!! Amazing lemon! I hope to see lots more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you.  I hope to write lots more :)

Reviewer: Inumimi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 10:43:11 PM Title: New Beginnings

26 chapters to get here!! So glad you finally let them get together after so many frustrations. I hope Kagome goes home to tell her mom the big news. Great story really enjoying it!

Author's Response: You know, I didn't plan on so many frustrating moments, but one kind of led to another.  Kagome will go home eventually, but it might be awhile. 

Reviewer: Eluwei Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2009 11:36:35 PM Title: New Beginnings

That was wonderful!  I almost feel sorry for Sango, she lost the bet.  Looking forward to the wolf finding out.  Hehe.  Going to be good.  Anyway, good work.

Hope your exams go well.

Eluwei



Author's Response: Thanks.  My exams went pretty wel; I'll know for sure in a few weeks.  Yes, their next encounter with Koga will be good.  It could be a few chapters, though. 

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2009 9:45:16 PM Title: Frustration, Part 2

awsome chapter. i feel sorry for kagome because koga cant get the fact that she dosn't want him through his thick skull. i also felt sorry for inuyasha when shippo ruined the moment for them. Write on! ^_^

Ps: about how many chapters do you think the storie will be?lol im haveing a great time reading this storie and i do and dont want it to end soon. i do because i want to know how it ends but i dont because this is such a great storie:>



Author's Response: I'm not sure how many chapters it will be, but we are nowhere near the end.  I have much more in store for you ^_^

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2009 3:21:03 AM Title: Frustration, Part 2

Yay! He finally came close to saying it! If I were Kagome I'd be doing backflips! Teehee! The scene in the river killed me! You could feel the sexual tension! Excellent job on that! :) It felt like you were right there in the thick of it. I was praying something would happen then Shippo had to go and ruin it. I loved how you brought in his comment from the first season when he said how it's a lot more fun to bathe together just think about what you can do when there are two of you. That line always cracked me up. I was like oh boy this kid has NO idea what he's saying! I'll be waiting for the next exciting chapter!! :)

Author's Response: I almost felt bad about the sexual tension, but knowing how I was going to end the chapter made me feel better.  I'm not sure how much Shippo knows about what adults do together.  He knows they were naked, and about to kiss, but beyond that...  He was probably just teasing them about the kissing.  He definitely hasn't had "the talk" yet.  Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2009 4:25:55 AM Title: Frustration, Part 1

*LAUGHS* that chapter was so funny. i satarted laughing till my sides hurt first when inuyasha said "Sesshoumaru…with breasts…GAH!" and then again when he said " Yeah, I know I stink" it's funny to imagen sesshomaru as a woman but its also kinda scary.WRITE ON! how often do you post?

Ps: how many parts are there? 



Author's Response: Yes, Sesshy as a woman is scary...and disturbing.  But you have to admit he does look pretty efemenite.  I'm thinking there will be 2 parts, but you never know.  Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2009 3:02:51 AM Title: Rebirth

i love the story write on! i cant wait to see what happens

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2009 10:22:45 AM Title: A Fresh Start

aww! those last 2 sentences were really great. please continue the story.

Reviewer: Inumimi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2009 12:55:13 AM Title: A Fresh Start

Really enjoing the story!

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2009 7:43:11 PM Title: Rebirth

i love the story write on i cant wait to c how kagome tells inuyasha off a bout leaving her in her time.*laughs*

Reviewer: inu lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2009 4:01:51 PM Title: Rebirth

please continue as soon as you can i want to read more please!!!!

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2009 7:44:40 PM Title: Picking up the Pieces

I'm enjoying this story very much! Graphic scenes bring out the realism, so don't be ashamed. :) It is very good, please update when you get the chance! :)

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