I tried really hard to keep this in character as much as possible and still get what I want. So don’t hurt me. Please. I got the other translations off the web. And please if you would like to correct them do so but I have one request review the actual story. I have had 2 “reviews” and they only corrected some of the translations that I put down. It’s kinda frustrating to get no creative input from a review. The rating of this storie has changed based on this essay http://sholio.laylalawlor.com/etc/NC17_essay.html

My personal characters Akiko, Takeshi, Sarela Amraphel and Tigan are under the Noncommercial and Attribution licensing Basicly if you use them let others know that thier mine and don't sell any works where they apear... prety simple but if you would like to know more heres the address...http://creativecommons.org/about/license/ Thank you for listening.