Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kagome's Mom
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37376 Read Count: 148047
I like where the story is heading. plus you added some suspense with the intro for Inu into the story, in the exposition. I also like the some hint of lemon during kags dream.
Wooo! great job, I wonder how she will keep her family from knowing. Lovein It!!
What to too. look like at tramp in thee potty room or stay quiet as a mouse. Oh the choices.
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A fight between brothers leads to an accident that can only be undone one way. Two brothers have to learn how to share and Kagome finds herself the center of attention. Inu/Kag/Sess
what share!!! man I wish I was Kags. Damn, I mean both of them. Lucky. I love Inu/Kags/Sess stories but people rarely write them. I hope you continue to buils sispense and conflict between her two inus. But I also enjoyed the splash on lemon. And how will our Kagome handle the fact that she died? MMM I LIKE.
Me Oh My... I dont know where this is heading But I must say I like the road. But what will you do about KIK-KI-HO.?
thaT is so wierd. Your scewing family. But hey what ever works.
Damn, to be sold by your own family because of your parents debts. Hope Inuyasha treats her right. You may need to edit a little bit more but other than that the story is growing.
Still little grammar errors. but mentioning Sess addeds to the plot conflict and maybe Inu and Kags realtionship will be the underlineing plot.
Woooo, scandalous... why is Sessy so interested and what the hell is kagome. Demon.. Half... human
After being sealed away for 2,000 years hanyou Inuyasha comes close to being free again, but first he has to grant three wishes to Kagome Higurashi who claims to want nothing. Well....almost nothing.
Inuyasha as a genie. nice, I like it. but his character in your story, at least now, is a bit of a dick. Why make Kags life weirder.Then again thats the beauty of it, right. I just suggest a small increase in conflict.
ohhhh snap, the plot thickens. Giggle.
Inu and kikyo were really close.But why would kags want to marry kouga,other than family stuff.You had one or two grammar mistakes but it is still good.
I always wonder what he would do if she had he peroid while they traveled. well I m glad we cleared that one up. Just picturing the look in his face. tampons $7, inus face when he pated her panties...priceless.
Author's Response: LOL :) Yep. We've definitely cleared it up. LOL :) I wanted to make this funny. I figured it would gross some people out, but that wasn't my intention of course. Anyway's sorry for the super late response but I was very very sick when you left this review. Better late than never right?
After finding out that Kagome and Inuyasha still aren't sexually active, Yuka lends Kagome a sex board game to seduce Inuyasha with. Will it work on the stubborn hanyou or will Kagome come up empty handed?
Birthday Fic for one of my best friends in the whole wide world! DannyGirl!! Happy Birthday girlfriend!
Loved It. Most of my friend aren't virgins. so i could definitly relatet to the friends pressure. i loved the lemons. Plus it was ccute that they were BOTH virgins.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Peer pressure can definitely be a bummer, but this is something Kagome wanted. She just didn't know how to go about getting it. I love writing lemons. They're just so much fun! It's cute to make them both virgins sometimes. :) Hope you enjoy the rest of my stories!
Wowaha. I don't know what to say. The dreams are an awsome idea, they throw readers off and helps build the plot. the the creation of your own chararter is a huge point in my book. She will be an exalent tool later in the story. I like the deep moral ideas of Kags in your story but it my seen KIND-OF clique, to protect Inu. But it also helps to show her kindness and love of childen, even if it is Sessy's. Love it. Good Luck
i like where it going, but i really dislike the mate. Plus i like how our girl Kagome proves her worth to mean old sessy.