Date: 14 Dec 2008 3:35:23 PM Title: Discipline
Oh and one other thing. This story reminds me of the song S.O.S by Apocalyptica. You should hear that song; very cool and soooo this story.
Author's Response: Actually I worte this one to Kronos Quartet's Sigur Ros cover - "Flugufrelsarinn". I sniffed out Apocalyptica - you're right; they are very good. Good choice.
Date: 14 Dec 2008 3:32:06 PM Title: Discipline
Okay now I very rarely ever review a story but after the one you gave me I was more than a little compelled to read your Naraku stories and I have to say thus far I LOVE THEM! You are doing an amazing job of portraying the wicked one. Kudos to you. Whoot! Whoot!
I will finish reading this later as I have a few errands to run. Can't wait to continue on this perverse journey. I'm such a hentai... Don't tell anyone I said that. Much love. Keva
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:14:54 PM Title: Comfort/Fear
oh crikey Kag the Domme woot woot no more pansy ass
Date: 11 Dec 2008 10:23:24 PM Title: Footsteps
Yep. Hooray! He's getting more and more addicted to her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2008 7:16:43 PM Title: Blush
Haha. That was really some coupling. Expecially to bring down the building around you. In the beginning, he set out to ensnare her in his web. I think she's beginning to spin her own web around him. It seems their both becoming so bonded to each other that they won't be able to kill the other even if they tried. To borrow from a Tom Cruise movie, they complete each other.
Author's Response: Hmmm...desire makes us do strange things. Could these two possibly have a happy ending? I'm not sure yet. Thanks for the comment! I hope you continue to enjoy :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 4:09:34 PM Title: Hesitation/ Hesitating
Wow! You just ended the chapter too soon. haha. So it would seem her body now craves his poison/acid. You know, only one wiriter has ever addressed that issue in a Sess/Kag story. He secretes poison/acid, too, but no one ever brings that up whenever they couple them together. I never really considered that until reading this story. I think in the future, I'll be asking that question before the coupling takes place. Sometines I like challenging writers with questions. Not always, but sometimes they thank me for opening up new doors and possibities. haha.
Author's Response:
Another reader had posed the question of just how deep Naraku's shouki might run within him. Since he's a being incapable of any nurturing, careing or loving it made sense to me to make even his seed a poison. There is nothing to him but death, evil and jealousy... at least for a while. Even a corrupt priestess has some power; even the most dominated slave can turn the tables on their master.
I am all about questions! Fire away! :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 9:33:23 AM Title: Blood
I find myself drawn to this story out of morbid curiosity. I don't really know how to describe this story. Except it's how I would imagine Naraku would really behave and it appeals to the dark side of Kagome. I'm not into chains but I'd much prefer them to being ejaculated on, though. That was always a turn-off for me. Some people like it and to each their own. Is he not ever going to come inside her anymore? Her body should have adjusted by now to his poison/acid. I caught where he seemed to be having an internal struggle over some beginnings of feelings for Kagome that seemed to puzzle him. Also, I'm glad you made him a virgin and Kagome was his first. It would really be something if now his and her souls were somehow bonded now because of them being virgins and influenced by the jewel. In a dark way they belong together.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 5:27:41 AM Title: Hesitation/ Hesitating
It is like she is under a spell, or perhaps she is broken and lost under Naraku's watch. It is definitely tantalizing in the way he enjoys himself through her defilement. I just cannot find any way to be disgusted.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 4:35:43 AM Title: Gentle
How long will it take to break her... I wonder how this will go and if he will keep her or discard her. I cannot wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: It will take at least 36 tries... more if I think she needs it. As to keeping or discarding, I haven't decided - I guess that all depends on how... entertaining she can be. :) This one seems to be writing itself - there must be someone whispering in my own ear late at night I'm very glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 4:29:54 AM Title: Freedom/Restraint
Ooh... very cold... I would shiver too!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 4:26:21 AM Title: Love
Wow... that has to be the best Naraku scene I have read so far... you have written his character to the T.
Author's Response: Thank you - that is high praise indeed!