Reviews For Dubious Relations
Reviewer: Muts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2008 12:58:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Date: 05 Feb 2008 12:58:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hey there!
I quite like this story, though I have one request: Could you please use some more alinea's in it? This whole bunch of text is quite hard to swallow in one...
Tia!
~Muts