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Reviewer: snowbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2008 6:04:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 -The Intrusion

Captor, not capture.  If he can get past her being human, maybe he can make her realize what she feels for Inuyasha is merely a crush.

Reviewer: Lady Nefertiti Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2008 9:24:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 -The Intrusion

Nice second chapter. Though a little short. Anyway, I was wondering do you write on the Fanfiction site?

Lady Nefertiti.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  There may be a lot of shorter chapters to keep the story coming daily.  Busy schedule.  :-\  Other than this site I haven't tried any others any suggestions are welcome.  I am still rather new to even letting people read what I write.  If you have any ideas you can write me on here or email me at LadyInuyasha2008@hotmail.com.  Happy reading.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2008 4:34:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 -The Intrusion

And I wonder how long he will decide to keep her. It is not hard to think Sesshoumaru attractive. ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the responses... If at anytime you would like to be notified as soon as updates are available you can drop me an email at LadyInuYasha2008@hotmail.com.  Glad that such an accomplished author is reading my story.  Thanks again.

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