Date: 03 Jul 2013 8:00:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Tempers Rising
Aww poor Kagome, the words hurt in my heart more than the hit. But Shomo is totally right, Inu didn't offer anything else instead of Kagome, and it really hurt... even though I've read your story it still gets to me. And I know hiw it ends, but.. it still hurts -pouts; I love the story
xoxo Mikazuki
Date: 24 Nov 2008 8:39:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Tempers Rising
One really obvious error, Sesshoumaru is Kagome's captor, capture is what he did to her. It's an entertaining story.
Date: 21 Nov 2008 6:26:31 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Tempers Rising
She's stupid if she submits. What he says about Inuyasha is true but Sesshoumaru is also using one of Naraku's tactics in trying to mentally break her into submission. To me, being slapped would make me more determined to resist.
Author's Response: Sometimes the greatest power in life is submission. Its not to be underestimated and Kagome never bows to anyone the story is still just begining.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2008 2:20:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Tempers Rising
Feisty as ever... Kagome is loyal because on some level she InuYasha's friend. When she said she would stay by his side, it was in acceptance of his feelings of Kikyo despite her own.
Sesshoumaru has not realized that...but I know he has his way. Will she come around to his ways? Or will she remain our stubborn Kagome.