Date: 23 Dec 2008 4:36:59 PM Title: Chapter 29-Miracle Island
good chapter cant wait to see what kagome does when she finds out that she has to become a demon and if kikyo will help too.
Author's Response:
Ah, yes, the big question. He he he you will just have to wait and see.
Maiko Anna
Date: 23 Dec 2008 3:43:37 PM Title: Chapter 29-Miracle Island
Aw what a cute chapter. The last sentence was so good good but I wished that you had kept it a bit longer (the chapter) to explain the island just a little better and in more detail as to why they were there (etc).
Thanks for clearing up the 'Maiko' and 'Miko' from the fanfiction site too.
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
I confess this chapter was so short due to exhaustion. I was up late trying to finish it and my eyes were closing. Don' t worry though there will be much more description and explanation of the island. You shouldn't have to wait long for more. Take care.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2008 6:32:53 AM Title: Chapter 29-Miracle Island
Very beautiful description on the island. I can imagine it vividly.
Author's Response:
I was trying so hard to paint the picture in my head, I am glad that I could get it through onto paper. Thanks!
Maiko Anna