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Date: 07 Feb 2009 7:57:15 PM Title: Chapter 44-Goodbye
I have so enjoyed the detail you've put into them all gathering together and especially their training. That helps to slowly build up an excitement for the coming battle. I have a feeling, it will be detailed differently from most other battle scenes. Most of them tend to mimic each other. A few stand out from them. I'm eager to read yours.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try so hard to give an accurate picture. I feel that most battles and fights are lost in stories because of lack of description, and they are often meant to be the most exciting parts. I am desperately trying to keep everything interesting while describing what you would see if you were actually there. Glad to know that I am not loosing interest to description. Thanks again!
Maiko Anna