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Reviewer: snowbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2009 7:57:15 PM Title: Chapter 44-Goodbye

I have so enjoyed the detail you've put into them all gathering together and especially their training.  That helps to slowly build up an excitement for the coming battle.  I have a feeling, it will be detailed differently from most other battle scenes.  Most of them tend to mimic each other.  A few stand out from them.  I'm eager to read yours.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I try so hard to give an accurate picture.  I feel that most battles and fights are lost in stories because of lack of description, and they are often meant to be the most exciting parts.  I am desperately trying to keep everything interesting while describing what you would see if you were actually there.  Glad to know that I am not loosing interest to description.  Thanks again!

Maiko Anna

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