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Reviewer: SilentWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 3:42:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

AWWSAUCE!

Reviewer: sesshoumarusmistressofthewest Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:46:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love the story so far but you may want to go back and fix this chapter and chapter 2 into smaller paragraphs it was hard to read all mushed together. Keep up the good work!

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