Date: 13 Apr 2009 2:51:27 AM Title: Where it all begins...
i loved the last chapter although i wish sesshomaru would do a little more looking into that fake kagome. i love how inocent naraku is in this storie. great job write on.
Date: 04 Apr 2009 3:02:24 AM Title: Farewell, My Sesshoumaru
Oh, man. I can't wait for the next chap. I love these kind of stories.... :D
Date: 18 Mar 2009 4:25:47 AM Title: Lord Malitzou
Kagome is soooo pregnant it ain't even funny! Haha!
The cats that took her family are most likey the cats of the East - it only makes sense.
Malitzou - I'd have to go with the english word malicious
Whay does the West seem so weak? No one wants a war, but they shouldn't let the east push them around.
Damn! Kagome is constantly dying in this fic! LOL, get that girl some life support! CLEAR!
Oh yeah, the story is awesome, keep it up.
Date: 18 Mar 2009 1:18:09 AM Title: Lord Malitzou
Omg! I can't wait until you continue! That was great, please update soon.
Date: 23 Feb 2009 1:55:32 AM Title: Love under the Moonlight
I like this story. I think that you need a beta reader, becuase you have a few grammar errors. But keep up the good work!
Date: 01 Feb 2009 9:58:10 AM Title: Where it all begins...
its not often Naraku is setting in a good light I think I've actually only read a handful and if I am not mistaken alot were written by Keva but I have to say I really like Naraku in this one and realllllllllllllllllllly hate his sister I hope he takes that whip to her she might be doing what their father wants but she is a bitch ...you sure her name ain't Kikyo? lol just kidding love the story can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 29 Jan 2009 12:18:10 AM Title: Death by an Arrow
What a horrid woman! Hopefully Naraku comes through.
Date: 29 Jan 2009 12:13:33 AM Title: Naraku
A new turn of events. Though Naraku was not exactly as he usually is at first. Instead he seems to be more of the one puppeted instead of doing the puppeting.
Date: 29 Jan 2009 12:07:07 AM Title: In comes the East
Sad for Kagome to be the second best? Or perhaps there is a way around the treaty?
Date: 29 Jan 2009 12:07:07 AM Title: In comes the East
Sad for Kagome to be the second best? Or perhaps there is a way around the treaty?
Date: 29 Jan 2009 12:01:50 AM Title: Thief-Napped
Well, I was not surprised that the twins were shady enough to try to keep Kagome.
Date: 28 Jan 2009 11:30:17 PM Title: Believe the Unbelievable
Well truthfully, most virgins then were not as forward. However
Hamakas have ties and are loose... fundoshi (wrap around underwear also have ties)...however that is okay. Just a reminder for future fics.:)
Date: 28 Jan 2009 11:25:47 PM Title: Serving the Ice Prince
Kouga is a real pig!
Date: 28 Jan 2009 11:23:06 PM Title: Meeting the ice Prince
Kagome's father is a fool... and has no idea about her sacrifice. However, she is already going ahead with her plan.
Date: 28 Jan 2009 11:19:08 PM Title: Where it all begins...
What a large responsibility she has taken on.