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Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 7:27:09 AM Title: Kanna

I cannot believe she would tackle the challenge... what a brave girl!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 7:19:37 AM Title: First Day

Have you actually known a waitress to make $30/ hour. Most waitresses make below minimum wage per hour (a couple years ago it was only $2.90 per hour plus tips) and plus tips, but also have to give 10% of tips to the house. At least some restaurants do that.

The only way she could seem to be making tips is a waitress or a bartender in a popular club. When I was growing up, the mother of one of my best friends made $500 a night and only worked 3 days a week as a bartender in a bar in downtown St. Louis.

Just giving you an idea. For $30 an hour, she would have to have a sturdy degree under her belt or as I said, be a waitress or bartender in a popular club.

I know this is your story, but the figures for it are not plausible figures even in an AU story built on real world situations.

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Regardless of wages earned, bills and such... it is still good. :)

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 6:58:47 AM Title: Bankotsu

Sesshoumaru is really sadistic. I find it odd to see Bankotsu be nice, but he does have this quirkyness to him that screams "I can be nice although I am a bad boy." lol

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 6:52:28 AM Title: Sesshoumaru

Very good... minor part in water bills. Usually a normal household is under $60 a month for water and trash bills. At least from my personal experience. I do believe it would not be much different even if it were Tokyo Japan. Most people end up going to public bath houses and pay very little.

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I am still hanging in here. I like it. :)

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 6:49:30 AM Title: Hope

$59,000 or yen??? That is a lot per month... usually even schools in other countries do per semester. Some of the minor colleges are $16,000 a year here in the U.S.

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Plot wise, I think this is a very good start.

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2009 12:06:47 AM Title: Soda Fight

I love this story. It has me laughing a lot, but it's sorta serious too. Hmm, anyways, update as soon as you can

Reviewer: red14lilli Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2009 9:10:56 AM Title: Soda Fight

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Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2009 12:50:41 AM Title: Cold Sweat

this one was awsome i loved the butt print cloth thing it was so funny to imagen. i could only imagen sesshomaru turning red great job. write on!

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2009 8:41:43 AM Title: Unexpected

i agree sesshomaru is being a spoiled prick.*sigh*mr high and mighty needs to stop being a jerk. lol. Write On! Great job

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2009 2:44:58 AM Title: Hope

awe thanks for the chapter but why did it have to end i wanted to know what happened. lol i hope sesshomaru and kagome are ok

Ps: great job with the last aac chapter it was very good. i just hope that kagome is ok with that creep.

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2009 11:41:44 PM Title: The Innocent Prank

LOVE IT. I absolutely love your story. I can't wait to find out what happens! Update as soon as you are able to, please! I would have reviewed each chapter, but I didn't feel like stopping, the story was just so good.

Reviewer: Anime queen 14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2009 5:27:51 PM Title: Hope

I love it write on! i love how sesshomaru and inuyasha's dad in the principle. how often do you post?

Author's Response:

between two stories, As A Courtesan and Beneath it All... i'd say i post once every week. Sometimes BIA is updated earlier than AAC, or AAC earlier than BIA.

thank you for reviewing! and supporting!

Reviewer: KogasWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2009 4:13:57 AM Title: First Day

love it update soon

 

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