Date: 19 Nov 2009 7:37:44 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lesson
continue please. i love this story. i can't wait to see what happens when they meet the person that they're supposed to meet.
Date: 13 Sep 2009 6:05:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lesson
I think that it's really cute that Inuyasha and Kagome get to train their "younger" selves. I can't help but wonder if that will cause them to become even more powerful than their older counterparts or simply help them to develope faster than their older counterparts did.
Author's Response: Well I think the Princess & Yasha have a leg up on their older counterparts as they 'know' what their potentals are, but in the end I think they will turn out to have about the same level of power as Kagome & InuYasha, they just might get to that level faster.
Date: 10 Jul 2009 11:33:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Waterfall
darn it. i really wanted to read more. i haven't been on in forever, so i thought that i'd come on. besides, i was bored and i wanted to read.
Author's Response: I will do my best to update when I can, (as I have stated I will finish this story no matter what!) company is coming tomorrow and I am all booked up for about two weeks so you may have to hold on for a bit!
Date: 10 Jul 2009 2:45:43 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Waterfall
Yay the kiddo's get to stay together this way I'm soooo excited. Another great chapter, although now I'm wondering if little Kags will get any powers.
Author's Response: I hope you liked how I got the two kids together (forever). Funny you should ask about the princess getting powers, I'm just working on that very question!
Date: 28 Jun 2009 4:41:21 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Other Side
No offense to the King but I have a feeling that he'll have a long wait vs a short one.
Author's Response: Well it all depends on how long I can drag this out! Part of me wants to just have them find the stupid relic and get it over with (oh and I have to deal with that stupid crown - what was I thinking!), but as far as I can tell this story has a life of it's own and I just sit here at the computer and try to squeeze it out! I keep trying to hurry the gang along, but they just amble along at their own pace!
Date: 21 Jun 2009 1:22:26 AM Title: Chapter 14 - On their own
Yay, another great chapter. I'm excited to see them on their own without the entrauge, it just seems more natural to me. I also really liked the way you had Inuyasha and Kagome give subtle lessons to their younger counterparts. I also think that this is great practice for Kagome and Inuyasha for when they have their own kids. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! InuYasha did a lot of growing up during the three years Kagome was gone so he's much better with kids (like Sango & Miroku's) than he was during their battle with Naraku. He knows that Yasha had a very different upbringing than him, I don't think he would like the idea of another version of himself being weak or unable to card for a version of Kagome.
Date: 10 Jun 2009 4:55:19 AM Title: Chapter 13 - A Big Decision
Yay, they are finally by themselves. I think that the 2 Kags are better of on their protectors backs anyways. Another great chapter and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for hanging in there! I have some plans for our kids that I hope you like!
Date: 03 Jun 2009 2:42:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 - An Interesting Day!
it was really good, and i hope you continue soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I will try to keep adding a chapter every 7-14 days (or as fast as I can get them written and checked over). I am doing my own beta work so I have to reread each chapter a bunch of times to find all my errors!
Date: 02 Jun 2009 6:21:12 AM Title: Chapter 12 - An Interesting Day!
Another great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
Date: 23 May 2009 6:36:29 AM Title: Chapter 11- One town after another
Another great chapter. Inuyasha brought up a good point about getting stronger faster than Yasha would because of the differences in their upbringings. It seems that Yasha probably won't develope the same insecuraties that Inuyasha had from being an outcast for a good 200 or so years. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for our favorite characters and their counter parts.
Author's Response: Sorry I am taking so long to respond to this! I am glad you noticed that there are so many differences between the two Kags and the two InuYashas. Yasha has had a much more secure upbringing than InuYasha, but as a slave he has had to learn to control his emotions in a way InuYasha never had to bother with. On the other hand they both have very strong Inu instincts that have a lot to do with how they act!
Date: 14 Apr 2009 8:37:07 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Night of the New Moon
Very good, keep writing please.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!
Have losts of houseguests at the moment and it is putting a crimp on my writing! As soon as I can get rid of them all I hope to speed things up.
Also I plan on getting everyone out of the castle in the next chapter!
Date: 23 Mar 2009 9:16:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Prophecy
please continue, this is a really good story, i like it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I will not stop till the story is finished and the quest compleated!
When this is finished I think I will start a story about the princess and Yasha ending up in Kagome & InuYasha's world (Also I think I will let the kids grow up a bit)!
Date: 22 Mar 2009 2:09:08 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Prophecy
Cute, I like the story plot! :) You might want to delete all that spacing at the end of Chapter 2. Very well written, I'm enjoying it! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!
I really appreciate all reviews, including techincal suggestions (I think I was able to get rid of the blank area at the end of chapter 2). I am still learing how to load stories so please let me know if you see any errors. I do not have a beta reader so if you see any truly horrid, spelling, syntax or grammer errors, that are driving you crazy, please let me know and I will try to fix them.
Thanks again!
Date: 11 Mar 2009 11:07:45 PM Title: Chapter 1-Together at Last
I l-o-v-e LOVE this fanfic!!!! Write more and update. i'll look for your name in the fanfics!!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! This the very first thing I have ever written so your imput is really appreciated. I am working on several new chapters and will post them when they are ready.