Reviews For The mystery of the purple eyes
Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed 
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Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:50:29 AM Title: Chapter 3:Rage and Sorrow of the full moon
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:50:29 AM Title: Chapter 3:Rage and Sorrow of the full moon
It's a very interesting story, but you might want to get a beta to fix all your spelling, grammer ect. Oh, hold down the Ctrl key and click on the characters you want, just make sure you keep the the maximum to six or seven. That's what the admins want. ;) Otherwise, very cute story! :)
Author's Response: thanks that was helpfull and i made errors because sometimes i have to rush and i don't see it until i read over it. =]
Reviewer: Angel415 Signed 
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Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:05:52 AM Title: Chapter 1:down the river, kanade's the name
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:05:52 AM Title: Chapter 1:down the river, kanade's the name
You should use capitalization. It would be a little easier to read if you do. Also there is some word repeat and tense errors. Sorry I only point this out to help, not to be offensive or anything of the sort.
Its a good story so keep writing! xxoo