Date: 27 May 2009 6:24:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
it's a good storie but somethings i noticed were you seem to jump around alot for example one minute it seems like fudel japan and the next its modern time and you might want to space your writing out because its alittle hard to read. one more thing is you cant really tell if kags is with sessy or yasha so you might want to clear that up. other than those things its a good storie keep up the good work.
Ps: you spelled miroku wron in the storie^_^
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2009 1:39:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really enjoyed that scene. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2009 6:49:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Haha! Their in yroble now. Will the guys be wearing future or feudal dresses?
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2009 6:39:54 AM Title: Chapter 2,3, and 4
How sweet! About time Kagome got someone to love her for her. Does Sesshy know ages dom the future?
Author's Response: THaks i'm glad u like it and i promise i'll get them to have a talk about the future.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2009 3:32:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think it has lots of potential. Just watch your grammar. I only wanted to know why Sesshomaru was headed that way?
Author's Response: well he was headed that way in hope of inuyasha and her argueing, so he could be her knight in shining armor. but it works both ways