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Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2009 6:15:12 AM Title: Make It Right

I love the comments! Especially since they are in direct relation to Inuyasha's trip to go see them. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2009 3:06:45 PM Title: Resolution

I'm glad Kagome came back! :) I can see they are connecting much better now! :) I wonder who is the demon under the city? I'll guess I'll find out! Update soon! :)

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2009 5:54:55 AM Title: Resolution

Yay happiness returns to world. I love that you made Inuyasha break down and appologize to Kagome for being an ass. All together another great chapter, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2009 1:56:37 AM Title: Politics

Great chapter! I'd say more, but now I have two more chapters to read.

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2009 5:17:44 AM Title: Repercussions

I think Sango and Miroku were a bit harsh and it all could have been avoided if Inuyasha had just explained to Kagome why he doesn't go out during the day. Kagome being her normal self doesn't treat him any differenly than any other person be they demon, half-demon, or human, it would never have occured to her. Also poor Inuyasha now has to deal with pissed off superiors and Iro doesn't understand what's going on at all; in my personal oppinion single people should never give relationship advise. Now that that's out of my system, another great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope Inuyasha wasn't too injured when he blacked out there at the end of the chapter.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2009 3:43:03 AM Title: Repercussions

Well, that was a over dramatization on InuYasha's end. She did not know and mean to cause trouble.

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2009 2:58:45 AM Title: Politics

Well it looks like Kags performance review is going to go up in smoke. Hopefully Miroku and Sango won't be too harsh considering she obviously didn't understand how people react to Inuyasha's presence.

Author's Response: Hmm...  I'm afraid I can't say anything or else I'll ruin the next chapter.  ^__^

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2009 2:57:02 AM Title: Politics

Poor InuYasha! I'm glad he shoved the politic guy away! They're so annoying! -_- Anyway, I'm wondering what will happen next? :)

Author's Response: Ah yes, the slimy politician...  It seems Inu-Yasha hates them just as much as the next guy.  As for what happens next... Well, check back tomorrow. ^__^

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2009 6:06:01 PM Title: Assistance

Hopefully Kagome can get his back up to snuff. He really is broken and would not be very helpful, especially with his self-destructive behavior.

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2009 2:05:14 AM Title: Assistance

I can't wait to find out her plan to get him to stop drinking, cause it will have to be incredible.

Author's Response:

Very true, very true.  And, from what I have been able to get from other reviewers who have known alcoholics, her plan is very sound in structure and should work quite well; but we'll see, I haven't gotten quite that far yet. ^__^  Anyway, I'm afraid you'll have to be a little patient to hear her plan, as it won't come out until chapter 14.  But not to worry, the next chapter is still quite important, and hopefully a good read. ^__^

 Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2009 1:14:21 AM Title: Assistance

That idea for Sango's weapon was cool. I thought I was going to miss her old one, then this was was explained to me. Anywho, great chapter.

~Mika



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you like the new weapon.  With this being a modern-day story, I didn't figure that a giant boomerange would fit so well, but what is Sango without her boomerang?  ^__^

 Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2009 12:34:33 AM Title: Possibility

Well isn't Kagome just the lil' ol' shard finder now? Though what she thought of was slightly depressing for the characters, that there may be more than one shard. Anyways, I can't wait for your next chapter, as usual.....

~Mika

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2009 4:49:09 PM Title: Possibility

Another great chapter, hopefully Inuyasha will be able to pull himself together. Also I think that Kagome has already had a good effect on him, as he seems to be trying to protect her in his own convoluted way by going to the quarry with her even though he knew that Sango and Miroku were going to be there. I think that one of my favorite things in this story is that Myoga isn't such a huge coward and I find it very amusing.

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2009 12:43:12 PM Title: The Demon Behind the Barrier

Once again it is another wonderful chapter. I found it funny, Kagome knew all along what he was trying to do.

Author's Response:

Isn't he such the petulant child sometimes?  Well, at least Kagome knows how to deal with it.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2009 2:25:47 AM Title: The Demon Behind the Barrier

Oh, how he has no idea how stubborn Kagome is... will he succeed?

Author's Response:

Well, you've certainly got their personalities pegged!  He's such a stubborn thing.  And yet, so it Kagome...

 Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2009 7:59:27 PM Title: The Nurses

Once again, Kagome knows how to control read Inuyasha. Anyways, this was another exceptional chapter and I can't wait for the next one.

~Mika

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2009 7:05:00 AM Title: The Nurses

Both Sango and InuYasha both being nursed. InuYasha is still having too much of a hangover to deal with Kagome. Wonder how many more antics...

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2009 3:58:12 AM Title: The Nurses

I really like how quickly Kagome is learning to read Inuyasha. I also think that it's really sweet that Miroku is taking such good care of Sango.

Reviewer: xXmika_ookamiXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 10:32:54 PM Title: Challenge Accepted

I wonder how Inuyasha will take the news of Kagome being his personal nurse. That should be, interesting. Anyways, as usual, I love it and can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 8:44:43 AM Title: Challenge Accepted

Go Nurse Kagome! It is kind of sweet their little chat on the way up the stairs to his place.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 8:37:33 AM Title: That Simple Nurse

Oh that is pure hilarious... InuYasha going cold turkey from booze! Listening to Kagome too, of all people!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 8:29:30 AM Title: Forgiven, Not Forgotten

Clever Kagome...

InuYasha is just so dramatic about a mere cigarette.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 8:22:30 AM Title: Trouble Brewing

InuYasha, the difficult patient...

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 8:17:39 AM Title: Fault

Ah, so this is how Kagome enters the picture!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 5:53:28 AM Title: Broken Promises

A little more hint on the past between InuYasha and Kikyo. I am feeling like I have been pleasantly reeled in.

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