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Reviewer: RosyPaths Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2009 6:54:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Storm

I liked this chapter, actually. I noticed the chapters are a little short and a bit... kind of separate in a way? It was a little hard for me to grasp the main line of the plot. I appreciate your effort though, just keep writing and writing and one day you will be an awesome writer! :)

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