[Report This]Date: 04 May 2008 5:38:41 AM Title: Chapter 52 Surgery on a Hanyou
Ooh... a Sea Monster? LOL I'm wondering if Kagura or any of the incarnations we know (and love) will show up. I fancy Kagura, although she really doesn't seem important to the story, so it really doesn't matter if she does show up or not. I'm also wondering when Sesshoumaru will show up again?
Man, 50 chapters... I commend you! I don't have nearly that many in any of my stories. I can't wait to see what happens with the sea creature. For now, Happy Writing!
Date: 04 May 2008 4:20:21 AM Title: Chapter 39 The Concert
AGAIN - YAY FOR LEMONS!!! LMAO <3
Date: 04 May 2008 4:10:20 AM Title: Chapter 38 Kagomes Recovery
I always worry about that as well! I also knew I loved my husband from the moment we met, but since many kids (AKA, our readers, lol) don't believe that, I always find myself explaining to them that there are situations where you can fall in love rather quickly. This is great so far, and I'm really enjoying this. The only thing I disagree with (but in your particular story, I understand it, given the circumstances) is bashing Kikyou. I actually really like Kikyou. I think she's a strong and complex character, and people judge her too quickly because of Kagome. But don't get me wrong, Kagome's my girl! I adore her. I really wish Kagome and Sango would get together more often, but maybe I just haven't gotten far enough into the story yet... And yay for lemons! LOL
Date: 20 Apr 2008 7:43:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Interview
lulz
A good start to a seemingly good story! I must read more! How is it that we all think of Inuyasha as a rock star in AU's, lol? Well, maybe not all, but at least you and I do... Although my Inuyasha isn't quite as much of a jackass, hehe. I hope to see this through to the end - happy writing! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you read more, and thanks for the review! My InuYasha starts off as a jackass, like in the anime/manga, but he gets to be less of one as he gets involved with Kagome. His character development paralells the snime/mange somewhat, as does the story. This is my first AU, I usually use the canon settings for my stories. I have 52 chapters an the story will probably go on for 20 more - hope you can stick with it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2008 6:57:01 PM Title: Chapter 47 Aftermath
i liked this chapter good job
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2008 5:12:43 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Intruders
i think you did a great job on this chapter keep going
Date: 12 Mar 2008 5:28:01 AM Title: Chapter 31 Kirara
Kikyo's a whore!!! ..... I'm not sorry
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I hate Kikyo too, just wait and see what happens to her, LOL.
Date: 12 Mar 2008 5:02:13 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Hot Spring
^_^
Date: 12 Mar 2008 2:02:03 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Fortress of Sesshomaru
Haha! Die Kikyo! Uh, I mean.....
Date: 12 Mar 2008 1:48:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 Attack in the Meadow
EEEE! Who's it? I'm dying from the suspense! #_#
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2008 1:21:00 AM Title: Chapter 20 It's Chinatown, Kagome
Hehehhehehehehe! See? Hilarious! I love it when InuYasha gets all jealous cuza Kouga! ^_^
Date: 11 Mar 2008 11:24:30 PM Title: Chapter 13 Archery Practice
HEHE ^_^
I really like the way you've modernized this thinga majig (too lazy to think of better word).
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2008 10:26:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 InuYasha and Kikyo
Awesome. I never read a fanfic where there were demons other than Sesshy, Naraku, Inu, Kirara, and Shippo, (ugh) and Koga (there's so many). But you have unimportant demons in here. ^_^ 1000/10 for originality!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2008 10:17:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 A Morning of Surprises
Erg. I hate Kikyo. Why can't she just rest already? !_!
But otherwise I like it. Keep writing! ^_^
Date: 11 Mar 2008 7:29:11 AM Title: Chapter 2 Kagome's First Day of Work
me like. time for bed though
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2008 1:15:59 AM Title: Chapter 43 Kikyo and Itaro
well it was an ok chapter but it is starting to get a little boring i don't mean to be offensive but i mean there is no action you get my piont i still like it though it just feels like since inuyasha and kagome are together and happy it seems like its already over or should be but thats just me
Author's Response: Sorry you feel that way - most people could not wait until Kikyo was told off. And the action will be coming up in the following chapters - after the last concert. Just because InuYasha and Kagome are together does not mean the story is over - maybe to you, but certainly not to me, other readers and the characters. I will not end it here, they still have a lot of action coming up as they find clues on Midorikos whereabouts. But hey, I am not forcing you to read it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2008 8:21:20 PM Title: Chapter 42 A Visit to the Hospital to See Sango and Kohaku
Uh oh someones jealous hahaha
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2008 7:57:36 PM Title: Chapter 38 Kagomes Recovery
AAAHHHHHH ABOUT TIME well yey loved it so cool good job
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2008 2:39:45 AM Title: Chapter 30 Totosai
Oh... well... ^^; I might as well make an account there and go read. I hope your FanFiction does well in the IYFG thingy, and I'll be sure to vote. ^^ Ja ne. ~Ghosteh
Author's Response: Thank you , but it is all here now. As for voting you can only vote if you are a member - and membership closed for this quarter. You are welcome to join in March after the voting and when they resume with the first quarter of '08 voting.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2008 6:44:41 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Fortress of Sesshomaru
It's very interesting. I didn't like this chpter as much, but you're still dou=ing great. ^^ I was wondering...are you still updating on animespiral? Ja ne. ~Ghosteh
Author's Response:
I haven't recently - I mostly post to Mediaminer.org (my favorite fanfic site), AdultFanFiction.net, and Eternal Destiny. This story also appears on FanFiction.net as well. I don't know if I like AnimeSpiral that much, since I can't tell how many hits I am getting on my stories. Maybe I will get back there sometime.
By the way, this story is up for an award by the InuYasha Fan Guild, and I just completed chapter 37....
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2008 12:02:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Interview
i love this story more chapters plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Author's Response: I just put up 6 more chapters. Glad you are enjoying the story, and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2008 12:00:43 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Fortress of Sesshomaru
Ahhhhhhh crazy baboon NOOOOOOOOO well about time but i loved it keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! They seem to be hard to get around here. I have almost 200 reviews for this story on Mediaminer. I am up to chapter 37 and will get the rest up soon...