Date: 08 Jul 2009 8:07:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story keep going i like where its headed
Date: 28 Oct 2008 3:36:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story! I really want them to stay good, its just too funny to see Naraku being nice :) I cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2008 5:25:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
It would be sweet if they stayed good, but it would be such a great irony for them to turn evil. For Kagome and Sango to recognize their feelings for them, then bam they're evil again.
But that depends if you want a happy ending or a tragic one.
Good story thus far, I enjoyed reading it.
Date: 05 Jun 2008 7:16:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I forgot to put this in my first review but, I've heard that song. I know it was probably from the series, but I can't remember where. All I remember was that a little girl was singing it.
Pure has become Impure, Impure has now become Pure.
Good has now become bad, Bad has become Good.
I even remember the tne, and I bet I'll have that stuck in my head forever!
Date: 05 Jun 2008 7:12:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think Naraku & Sesshy should stay good. You cold keep Inuyasha alive, and play out the series. Only with Sesshy in Inu's place, and vise-versa. The same with Miroku and Naraku.
If you think it's a dumb idea, I could use it myself. But if you're gonna use it, I'll just write something else.
Date: 31 May 2008 5:35:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Go ahead, I love your story :x
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2008 6:31:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm... as an added review and response to your question on whether to keep Naraku and Sesshoumaru good or eventually turn back... I think turning back, HOWEVER you can always put a twist on it. If they or just one were more compassionate in the end, but still in character, perhaps the pairing would work, since I see you listed S/K for one pairing.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2008 6:28:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
A very dark fic. Inu Yasha already out of the picture and now Miroku is evil. I wonder what will happen next.