[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:27:32 AM Title: Perspective
If you wanted primitive you accomplished that task. But I loved it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:22:30 AM Title: Forgotten
Oh god I hate you sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:19:15 AM Title: Memory
Are you trying to kill me?????
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:16:18 AM Title: The Beginning
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!! I'm gonna die of a heartattack before I get to the end here KLAIRE!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:14:24 AM Title: A Second Of Eternity
Klaire how could you be so mean!!!! Sesshomaru is awesome. I hope he wouldn't say that to his little brother. But then again in my mind he's perfect but he probably would. Never mind forget my rant. To the next chapter I go.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:09:48 AM Title: Fall
Dear god Klaire you're lucky you're family. I should beat you for this chapter. Making me think that kind of thing. Anyways I love it. There's something I have to check before I say it so I won't say it yet. I'll call and explain my thinking to you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 3:05:43 AM Title: Too Late, Too Soon
Okay Klaire I'm reviewing. Well I will as long as you promise not to squack like a bird and throw rocks at me! Now if that didn't tell you who it is I'm smacking ya. Anyways so far I love it. It builds suspense and make sense. I review again next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2008 12:05:32 AM Title: Epilogue
You probably thought I forgot about your request...Nope! I finally finished reading the manga, and I must say I'm glad I remembered to read your stories. This was very good; thrilling, dramatic, and suspenseful.
That said, I think Rumiko Takahashi would have had a riot on her hands if she went with this 'alternate ending,' even minus the lemon. I actually liked the ending to the manga; my biggest problem was that Kagome waited three years to return. So although I liked your story, it doesn't really compare to the manga's ending. For one thing, Sesshoumaru is way out of character. As the manga winds down, he and Inuyasha come to an unspoken understanding. They fight alongside one another, help each other out of pickles, and don't even try to kill each other anymore. The Sesshoumaru from the beginning of the series might have been that callous to his half brother, but not after going through 500 chapters of change and growth.
I had a few other issues with your story, but they were minor ones. I want to stress that this was still a highly enjoyable read.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2008 5:28:21 AM Title: Angel Of Mercy
So I just read the ENTIRE story.I've been sitting her reading for a while now. I even didn't pay any attention to my hour long phone conversation because I was reading this. I have to say, it's one of the best stories I've EVER read.
It's filled with a lot of ups and downs. You had me joyful, sad, angry, and kinda laughing at parts. I even actually cried. I'm not even lying. The end made me happy and my heart is now fluttering.
It's amazing. Simple as that.
Date: 25 Sep 2008 4:14:12 AM Title: Epilogue
yEy again!!!! I loved the ending!!! I so warm and fuzzy inside now!!! yEy!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2008 4:03:58 AM Title: Angel Of Mercy
yEy!!!!! *claps excitedly* I loved the "sit" part! That was great!!! Nice story! I was very entertained!
Date: 25 Sep 2008 3:21:20 AM Title: Death
Darn it! *sniffles* you make me cry!!! I hope you have a good plan in mind to fix all this! And I hope you aren't planning to keep Inuyasha human. I like him as a half demon. Oh well, I guess I'll have to read to find out.
Date: 25 Sep 2008 2:42:24 AM Title: Brothers
Screeeeeeeeech!!!!! AGAIN??!!!!
First of all, you tore off Inuyasha's ears again???!!! DAMNIT!!!!
Second, and more importantly, you'd better not kill Kagome!!! At least not permanately!!! Whew that was a pretty intense chapter!
Date: 25 Sep 2008 2:17:21 AM Title: Rivals
Can't wait to see what happens next!
And you're rigth, Sesshoumaru is a difficult character to work with. I have written a few stories where he was at least one of the main characters, and I know personally how difficult it can be. He's soooo uncooperative!
I think you did a good job keeping him in character.
Date: 25 Sep 2008 1:46:44 AM Title: Void
I'm really curious as to what happened to poor Inuyasha! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 25 Sep 2008 1:07:07 AM Title: Desperation
Can't wait to see what if anything Sesshoumaru can do to help!
Date: 25 Sep 2008 12:48:35 AM Title: Wish
OMG! I am wishing that this is was nightmare, but I fear that it is not. Ugh! that was hard to read! I hope things turn out okay for him!
Date: 25 Sep 2008 12:17:02 AM Title: Plans & Honesty
Screeeeeeeeech!!! *flails arms uncontrollably* What the heck did he do???!!!! Very nice dramatic twist! Off to the next chapter I go!
Date: 24 Sep 2008 11:36:11 PM Title: The Awkwardness of Impulse
yEy!!!! Flufff!!! Iliked this chapter!
Date: 24 Sep 2008 9:50:26 PM Title: Perspective
Well, I thought the lemon could have been more detailed. I am a lover of citrus! I like to write them myself! And even though I often find it a bit difficult to write lemons, I do try to make them a bit more detailed, so as to suck the reader into the moment. It wasn't bad, just kinda short.
Date: 24 Sep 2008 8:56:27 PM Title: Forgotten
Interesting stuff. There's just one thing. In a few places you have used the word "than" when it should have been "then." It is a rather common mistake to confuse the two, and I know that the story is already finished. I just wanted to point that out for future knowledge. Off I go to the next chapter.
Date: 24 Sep 2008 8:23:18 PM Title: Memory
*licks tongue childishly* Your little cliffhanger has no effect on ME!!! Muhahahahaha! The next chapter is already posted! Hahahahaha! Off I go!
Oh, and by the way, I have been enjoying the story so far. And I have a short attention span! XD
Date: 24 Sep 2008 7:18:27 PM Title: The Beginning
*points finger at author* I'm warning you Dark_Author! I don't know what you're doing here but I don't think I like it!
I'm hoping for a happy ending! Off to the next chapter!
Date: 24 Sep 2008 7:03:51 PM Title: A Second Of Eternity
Hmmm, I am intrigued to see where you are going with this. Off I go to the next chapter!