Date: 05 Mar 2009 1:59:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I won't give up if you won't. I understand about forcing yourself to do anything. I hope the spark comes soon I'm dying here! Don't force yourself I want your story to continue to be good. If you force yourself it usually ends up a mess no matter what it is your doing. Come on find that spark I know you have it in you. I still think Kagome should look at what she has, two fine, damn hot demons drooling over her, not only fine but powerful! I say keep them both Kagome!!! Don't do something you'd regret! Have your cake, pie and cookies with milk and enjoy it all! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
I'm glad my review gave you a boost that was my intension.
Date: 16 Feb 2009 3:56:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
More Please! I keep checking for update and come up dissappointed, don't ditch us!!! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2009 1:49:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Dang this is getting hard core!!!! I Love It!!!! Oh and Kagome should choose Inuyasha!
Date: 30 Jan 2009 2:54:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
You need not worry about reviews. Your story is pretty good, don't depend on others to help you finish it, your doing great!!! I'm glad I came across it, I've been reading it all day. Clam down relax ^_^ all is good. Sometimes asking for reviews can turn your fans off. I don't review till I read the third chapter, I like to give a story and the author a chance before I say anything. I've read finished stories with zero reviews, that's confidence! Hang in there you've got some readers hooked. But I would ask my readers who Kagome should choose, I have trouble with that to. I write fan fiction for my friends but I'm not brave enough to post yet I always have trouble choosing, who can? Two hot demons, come on who can choose? Since I can't choose and you can't choose, let the girl have her cake and eat it to. Let her have both, then the brothers have to get along, that would be fun to write. Don't choose, lucky girl. Let her have it all!!! I'm really enjoying your story, you have nothing to worry, just write! I'm not putting you down for asking for reviews, I can understand your anxiety in wanting to write a good fic and feed back can be helpful and good sometimes and it can also be hurtful, just relax it will come. You'll see, reviews will flood in as you continue on. I love the emotion you described when Sess ran out into the rain confussed, didn't know how to handle the emotions that rushed into him, someone like him it had to be terriable fighting his pride and just afraid of what he was feeling and not understanding it. I could see him standing in the rain lightening flashing around him as he pounded the ground, the human he considered a daughter is in danger and he is helpless to help her. Excellent moment written wonderfully, should be very proud of that. My fav, part, excellent! I just wished that Kagome took Shippou with her, but she did change her mind about going home at the last moment. I do like your Kagome, I do hope she gets her warmth and spark back, I liked that about her, but being hurt can mess with you badly sometimes. So are they all going to join forces now and go after Narku? This can get very interesting, I can't wait for more. Don't worry I don't review every chapter, I usually read a good story to the end, or as far as the author gets on it. I hope you plan to finish this no matter what. Relax, the reviews will come your doing great. In truth it dosen't matter what we think it's what you think, it's your story go for it! Still I say let the girl have both hot demons! make both of them approach eachother (brothers) with the idea at the same time, can you see how funny that would be, Sess swallowing his pride, and Yash swallowing his anger all because they are madly in love with a human? Make Kagome think about it. Hey, it's your story do as you please, I'm getting carried away, told you sometimes reviews can be a bad thing. ^_^ Go for, Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, your review is definitely the longest one and the one that gave me the most confident. Right now I just write when I feel a spark because I can't just write as good forcing myself. Don't worry I will finish this story no matter how long it takes. Thank You again. I hope that you didn't give up on me yet.
Midnight Maiden
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2009 3:14:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I cant wait for the next chapter.i kinda sit on the fence when it comes to sesh and inuyasha being paired with kag's.ive read some great stories with both pairings so which ever way it goes is fine with me.but then again if kag goes with sesh wont rin be left out??
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2009 7:46:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
InuYasha is jealous... classic! I think the incident with Rin being cursed although sad for Rin is a good addition to the plot.
Will InuYasha follow them?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2009 8:58:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Happy new year to you too loving the story
Date: 21 Jan 2009 3:41:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
please continue. i like it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2009 4:22:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
it is a most exciting story can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 2:57:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
that was great write more!
Date: 17 Sep 2008 9:44:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
are u going to finish this? im dieing to know what happens im a sess/kag fan but i dont think kagome should kiss him its to soon but i think inuyasha should get mad though and thinks thats what they were doing
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2008 6:49:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just an FYI... 100 means page views, not people. So, if you have 6 chapters, you have around 18 to 19 readers.
As for the fanfic... I am extremely interested in reading more. How will this develop? I think the possibility between Kagome and Sesshoumaru at the moment are much higher. Despite InuYasha being injured, it does not rule out how he had emotionally wounded Kagome.