not bad u should keep writing though i like it but it needs more like mabye kouga tries a move on kagome and inuyasha gets pissed or sothing like that and he relizes ayame was always there for him and that he loves her too! u might think wat the hell do i know i'm a 13 year old girl who shouldn't whatch/read this stuff bat i've gotten good at judgeing storys so it's just a suggestion *shrugs* i'm not telling u what to write i think its a good idea i'd even help u if u want i love writing but....*blushes* i don't have a single story on here hehehe well keep in touch bye!