[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2009 3:28:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
am looking forward to them all meeting
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2009 12:34:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
This is going to be really interesting! i can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2009 5:21:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
The idea of Inu with an earring sounds sexy! I wish there was a picture to see. This chapter was really good. I can't wait to see how everyone interacts in America!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2009 4:03:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
hmmm is shad's a demon or a demon slayer in America?? her pic sounds like something that Sango might look like if she never met Kags
Author's Response:
She's not a demon, and her demons are very different. Thanks for the review. :)Eluwei
P.S. Please use her full name. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2009 1:52:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
wow that is wonderful Midoriko is at peace the family is together everyone is happy this is perfect!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 12:21:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
This was a great chapter and now that you have bought in the new characters, I can't wait to see how the trip to the U.S. goes.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2009 4:24:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
hmmmm Queen and Shadara this sounds interesting since Brook knew how many were coming and one was a cat there is power there me thinks great story as always
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you!! Brook is aka 'the one who sees'. As for power lots of it. I've said before that the Blackwolf is hell on wheels and here she comes.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2008 4:13:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
You did really good. At least Kagome gave fair warning this time before she sat him. I hope you had a happy holiday!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2008 8:53:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
as before a great story glad to see it continued thanks for writting with all that is going on hope your holidays are going well
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2008 3:43:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
a Grandma holy schnikes ! that is so cool and everyone is together this is a great story
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2008 12:03:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
As always, awesome. I really am glad that the brothers have finally bonded together. How devastating to find that you had a grandmother too late to know her. The guys should have enough of freaking the girls out but I guess boys will be boys!
Date: 01 Dec 2008 5:54:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love the idea of Miroku and Sango being spiritually bound. I've never seen a fic where Miroku kept the powers from the yokai he sucked in but it does makes sense seeing that he can keep up with Inuyasha and has shown he has a great deal of strength. Great work!
Date: 30 Nov 2008 9:02:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I totally didnt see that one coming! I have soooo many questions, please update soon.
Date: 29 Nov 2008 6:25:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hi I've been looking on Devient Art for your story and I can't find it, I'm not so sure how to navigate the site, Cna you tell me how to find it I can't wait to read about the Blackwolf, I'm very intrigued! I can't wait for the new chapter of Desperation! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Date: 27 Nov 2008 10:16:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't wait! * heading to DA*
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 9:55:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! It was very deep and emotional, I absolutely loved it! "Next" button-here I come!!
Ten!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 9:44:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
sent it to me i love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 9:23:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was great! I think your death-bed proposal came out better than mine did! Seriously, great job! Shippou referring to Inuyasha and Kagome as "Mama" and "Papa" is very cute, and makes his character seem more "real" than he usually appears.
Another ten!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 9:14:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! This was a perfect mix of descriptive sentences and dialogue! Wonderful job! I especially loved the part where you have Kagome very quickly sum up the truth of her "illnesses". It gives off the feeling of being tired and being rushed at the same time, which is exactly how Kagome must be feeling. It was also very well written.
I'm a writer myself, and I also wrote my two stories because the ideas were getting in the way of my novel, so I can entirely relate you there. Sitting at the computer, trying to type my book and then suddenly "what if Inuyasha did this? What if that happened instead...?" Anyway, good luck with the book, but beware this fanfiction writing...it gets addicting.
Ten again!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 9:06:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very good! Again, it's dialogue-heavy, but the dialogue does not feel forced, and comes off as necessary to the chapter (and that's kind of hard to pull off well), but you did it!
As far as Sesshomaru goes, he does seem a bit out of character, but that's okay...as obviously, he needed to seem a bit out of character to fit the story properly. What matters is that he still feels like Sesshomaru, and he does. Great job there, too!
Again, the "next" button is calling me. Another ten!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 9:00:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your first chapter, and it's definately very well done and intense! Your descriptions are well written, but (and this is just my opinion), I feel there should have been more of them as this was a bit dialogue-heavy. I also don't have a clear idea of when this story is taking place (although that's not necessary to know, I'm just curious).
All in all, great work, and I am anxiously looking forward to clicking that "next" button over there!
You get a 10 from me!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 7:37:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am really loving the story lol evenly though I eagerly wait for the next chapter I hope you have a good holiday season.
Date: 27 Nov 2008 2:55:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad they are all back together and the jewel will now be whole, but will demons still come after them? It was so funny that Kagome slappped Sessy like that, I was gaping then I just bust out laughing with Miroku. Why does he still have the wind tunnel even after Narku has been defeated? I can't wait till they get back to the house and explaine every thing! It was so warming to see that Yash bonded them together, making them a real family. It seemed that Yash learned a few things after believeing that he lost his friends and making sure they are together for always. I can't wait to learn how! I know Sessy has something to do with it, he has the power and the strength to do it. Also, is he jealous that Yash made them pack? He was a bit icy to the friend that asked him what was happening? I can't wait to see how the brothers become closer. It seems that both learned to cherish friends and family when they believed to have lost them. Like the saying goes "You don't know what you've got till it's gone." I'm so glad I found your story!!!!!! You ROCK! In case I haven't told you before! Thanks!!!! Update soon, Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 1:24:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad to see that the gang is all together and I am thrilled that Inu marked them all as his pack. You really made my day by allowing Kagome smack Sessy! He so deserved it. I'm glad to see the little ones are better and I hope you have a happy holiday (if you celebrate it) and I can't wait until next post!
Date: 26 Nov 2008 4:06:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm so glad their demon fighting days are not going to be over because they are in the present! The woman has to be Sango which Mioku isn't far behind. Did Sessy do something to ensure they lived that long or is it Sangos relatives or reincarnation? I remember Sessy said he traveled with them to defeat Narku and gather the shards, maybe they became friends. I hope it's them. It was so sad that the well closed and Kagome couldn't say good bye. I think she will be alright. Will they have to face a new enemy or just spend the time adjusting to their new lives? I cant' wait for your next update. Thanks for updating regularly, I'd freak if you took to long. Thanks. Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel