Date: 11 Dec 2008 10:56:39 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Questions of the Heart
no? he's letting her go? why? the way you described sesshomaru's sadness in this chapter actually made me cry. i really hope he doesn't let her go, but i doubt you'd dissapoint us all like that ;)
*sigh* i really need to stop checking this sight in the morning , i'm not late and my makeup is smeared.
thanks for updating so quickly, i appercaite it (:
Author's Response:
Don't feel bad because sometimes I am late to work because I am reading reviews. :-P I do hate to disappoint. There will be an update soon.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2008 6:02:38 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Questions of the Heart
Well, that is a total bummer for Sesshoumaru and Kagome does not know his heartache.
Author's Response:
Sometimes it's the person who is loved that is blind. There still may be home for them. There will be an update very soon.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2008 4:22:52 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Questions of the Heart
oh no! how awful ugh stupid Ses he should have grabbed her up in his arms and told her the truth ! ugh am crying not fair!
Author's Response:
Don't drown just yet there may still be hope for these two.
Maiko Anna
Date: 10 Dec 2008 8:16:56 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Searching for Answers
You just HAD to stop there didn't you? I hate cliffies!!! GAH girl update before I die of impatience!!!! by the way good chapter, wonderful details of sesshy... ^_^
Take care-
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
Sorry for keeping you on the edge, but I love to leave the reader wanting more. :-P No worries though I will be updating soon. Glad that you liked the details... I try to paint the picture as best I can.
Maiko Anna
Date: 09 Dec 2008 8:42:47 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Searching for Answers
no , why ? another clifhanger . this story is like a drug , i can't stopp . it keeps getting better and better as well. lol today i skipped a meeting just to come home and read it . when you finally complete this story , i hope it gets featured or atleast win a prize . though , i'm not sure if youre suppose to submitt the story in ;
Author's Response:
You made my day. I am so glad that you like the story so far. I hope that I can keep it up. I put my all into it so it means so much to hear that people like it that much. I'll be updating soon.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2008 7:50:30 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Searching for Answers
I did not think Sesshoumaru would ask her the question directly. I wonder if there is a way?
Author's Response:
Desperation does crazy things to people, and right now I'd have to say that Sesshomaru is a little desperat. :-)
Maiko Anna
Date: 09 Dec 2008 5:46:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Searching for Answers
good good love your story
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2008 7:35:59 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Searching for Answers
have fingers crossed ...fountain of youth fountain of youth!...anyways lol loving the story hope Ses either finds a way or decides it doesn't matter.
Author's Response:
I hope so too. We'll see what I come up with.
Maiko Anna
Date: 09 Dec 2008 12:38:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Plan
wow i never thought sesshy can be so sad. good chapter.
Author's Response:
I never thought that I could ever make him be that sad, but I finally got it. Glad you liked it.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2008 4:05:56 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Plan
I bet he plans to send her away so he won't have to watch her age and die. Then he'd better find some way to extend her life. There has to be some way to make it part of the mating ritual. I've read 2 or 3 stories that left her with human years with the knowledge that he would only have her for a short time. I hated the endings because it was not fair for either of them and it ruined the story for me. I'm eager to see what you come up with.
Author's Response:
No fears there is something up my sleeve, but I don't want to give it away just yet. I will be updating today so there will be more to come.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2008 3:41:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Plan
oh no he isn't thinking of not even trying that can't be it is not fair!
Author's Response:
When has Sesshomaru walked away from something that he wanted? :-) You'll just have to wait and see.
Maiko Anna
Date: 08 Dec 2008 3:01:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Plan
still loving the fic and you did an good job of portraying Sesshomaru and his emotions. I mean even some people have to show emotion sometimes. I do hope that he can find a way to get her an anti-aging potion or something like that. Maybe she'll turn into a demoness?
Oh well, update soon!
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. There's a lot more to come between these two. I will be updating soon. I don't want to keep you all in suspense for too long.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2008 2:09:03 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Plan
Will there be a way to extend her life or will he accept her mortality?
Author's Response:
You will all just have to wait and see, I have something special in mind for these two. Happy reading.
Maiko Anna
Date: 08 Dec 2008 1:26:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Plan
Aw ! He cried , I love that you made Sesshomaru emotional. After all that rough hard exterior he's compassionate and he cares. Update sooon !
Author's Response:
There will be another update today no worries. I will keep them rolling out. Glad to see that you like the chapter!
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2008 12:59:41 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Secret Ally
i hate clifhangers , but i love this story . i can`t tell you that enough . i just wish fluffy would compromise with kagome , though youve done a good job of keeping sesshomaru's character in tact . i read some other fanfics , and the character is suppose to be sesshomaru but he's way to nice & it's just not right . i hope that wasnt confusing for you :S
Author's Response:
Always happy to please. I will give you all a little background on one of my goals for this story. The first and foremost was to stick with the way that Sesshomaru would really act. I think, not that it counts for much, that the reason that Sesshomaru is the favorite is becaue of the way that he acts. There is something sexy, alluring, and out right hot about a man that is full of confidence, mystery, calm, and that can protect and take care of you. Lets face it a little hard to get and drop dead gorgeous never hurts either. I only hope that I can get Sesshomaru right and keep him that way. So glad that you are enjoying!
Maiko Anna
Date: 05 Dec 2008 6:56:57 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Secret Ally
good chapter. cant wait till the next one
Author's Response: Thanks I'm working on it.
Date: 05 Dec 2008 6:37:54 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Secret Ally
Just when she was beginning to see another side to him, he just had to go and remind her of his feral side. As long as he keeps showing that side to her, I don't blame her for not submitting. He just convinced her that he ould never change, at least those were her thoughts. He just made his job harder. I'm a big beliver in compromise. When he's finally able to open up to her and willing to meet her at least halfway, then I'll start having hope for them.
Author's Response:
Sesshomaru may never be a softy, but he will figure it out sooner or later... at least I hope. ;-) Sesshomaru still has a lot of growing to do, but he will get there.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2008 4:19:55 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Secret Ally
ooooh this is getting sooo good hope for an update soon
Author's Response: Thanks... you won't have to wait long.
Date: 05 Dec 2008 2:11:03 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Secret Ally
I was right it is getting good! i thought it was so cool that it rained due to Sessy's mood. Will Kagome find out the truth about what happened between him and Yash? I can't wait for more! I love the way your story flows and all the surprises. Also watching Sess grow emotionally and trying to deal with them. Excellent! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Author's Response:
I am glad that I am living up to your exepectations. I hope that there is so much more that will keep you entertained. I will be posting a new update soon. Thanks again for all your support. You have no idea how much it means to me.
Maiko Anna
Date: 05 Dec 2008 12:49:58 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Face Off
Awww...Sesshomaru wants to keep Kagome around for a long time. Melts my heart.... ^_^
Great job. Now your fic is worth reviewing for. Tell me if I seem strange if I keep reviewing and seem like a stalker.
^_^
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response: Absolutely not! I love getting reviews, how else am I supposed to know if I am doing well or not. They brighten my day, and you can never have enough. If everyone reviewed everything I wrote I would be ecstatic. There will be another chapter tonight. Happy reading.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2008 11:00:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Secret of the Well
Hi- Just one thing. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! This was the best sesshomaru 'inside thought' I have ever heard....
After I have mated her, I will bring her back to him, so that he may see what he lost. All on the account of a dead priestess.
Okay I'm done now. Love your fic by the way and can't wait till you update. Don't make this fic short!
---Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
It just came to me like a bolt of lightening. I have to admit that as true as it may be, I had to laugh writing it. No worries about this being short. Every time I think that I am coming near an end new things keep popping up. Get an idea and roll with it, eventually it rolls into the path of another idea. Thanks for your support.
Maiko Anna
Date: 04 Dec 2008 8:02:27 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Hojo's Close Call
hi-
I like this chapter cause it shows he 'cares' about Kagome but isn't trying to show it. Of course Kagome notices he's jealous right away.....I swear guys.....bound to get jealous even though the guy is just a friend, well not even...huh. ^_^
Update soon. Loving the fic.
Lady Nefertiti.
Date: 04 Dec 2008 7:01:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - InuYasha's Decision
ii love this , update asap <3
Author's Response:
Thanks I try to keep the updates coming daily. Glad that you are enjoying.
Date: 04 Dec 2008 5:38:24 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Intruders
just a good as always.
Author's Response: Thanks Ruby, I am trying my very best to keep the chapters coming daily or at least every other day. I am so happy that you are enjoying.
Date: 04 Dec 2008 3:13:24 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Intruders
I wonder when Kouga' s statement about Inuyasha trading her will sink in. She'll then know why Sesshoumaru looked at her the way he did earlier.
Author's Response:
There is so much to write... and so little time. :-)