loved it please keep it coming

This is getting really good!!!  Inuyasha is an idiot!  Didn't he hear that Kikyo is still dead?  I guess love is blind.  It's pretty cool to see the changes in Sessy and he is still Sessy.  Your doing great with the characters, I can't wait to read more, keep the chapters coming!  I know Sessy is going to do a good job cheering Kagome up and helping her to repair her esteem as she helps him to understand that life is more than killing as well as teaching him how to use his hands for just smaching trees and ripping out throats.  This is going to just get better!!!  Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

I just had to add another review in response to InuAngel which I just read.  Thank you and bless you for being such a strong person.  Your daughter is blessed for having you as a mother.  My mother stayed single for many years until thankfully she met my stepfather who adopted me and gave me not only his name but his heart full of love.   Don't give up.  There is someone out there for you and your daughter.

I'm loving this story so much.  Its great to see Sesshy struggle with keeping up kis stoic facade while he is dealing with his inner turmoil of not wanting to admit out loud that he is falling for Kags.  I think that you have written him very well.  He still acts like himself to an extent, but we have all seen that Rin softened him a little near the end of the manga, so logically if he were to fall for someone like Kags, who is, in essence, just as bubbly and joyful as Rin, then he would eventually soften towards her as well.  Keep up the great work.  Love the quick updates.  Cant wait to read more. I cant wait to see what happens when Sess finally swallows his pride and admits to Kags that he wants her.  Will it be in a moment of desperation, or will it be in a totally romantic setting.  Cant wait to find out.

Author's Response: Sesshomaru is a great challenge to keep himself, but Sesshomaru in any other way, in this story, just isn't worth the time it takes to write.  As a writer I find myself between two very different places while writing this.  There are days where Sesshomaru and Kagome practically write themselves, and then there are those other days where I can't even imagine what they would say to each other.  I know that I hate having to wait months for an author to finish a story so I try to strap myself to the computer chair for a while everyday so that readers can stay "into" the story. I aim to please, at least try to.  That is why there are some shorter chapters that could possibly be combined.  Thank you so much for the review.  I hope that the future chapters will live up to those written so far.

Cute how he got out of fully answering Kagome's quesiton of why does he care who her friends are!  It will be interesting to see Sess's reaction on the streets, not having people cower from him or treating him like royality.  Kagome may come home more exhausted than she does when she come home from fighting demons.  I like the last chapter when Kagome reminded him of his strength, telling him that his hands can rip through trees, Sess actually looked at his hands as if he just realized how strong he is.  I think Sess is just oblivious of himself and what he can do.  I don't think he really means to hurt Kagome physically, I think he truly dosen't know.  Am I right?  He is getting better and willing to pay more attention to his own actions.  I've been reading some of Snowbirds reviews I understand her completley, I married right out of highschool barly 18, to escape the verbal abuse in our home with my parents to eachother and to me, only to fall into a world of physcal, verbal and emotional abuse at the hands of my husband, who knew exactly, what he was doing.  He didn't need to look at his hands as if he didn't know what he was capable of, he knew.  I stayed with him for a year and five months.  He stripped me of friends and family, I had nobody, I left when I was 5 months pregant, nearly losing my baby due to him and lost some vision, I walked out of the hospital before he could come get me, and haven't looked back.  He found me right after her birth, I panicked and was going to run and refused, I dared him to come near us.  apparently he's not as stuid as I thought he was, he never came near, I just changed my number.  I'll be damned if my little girl grows up with that.  I haven't dated in 3 years and have no intension to. I'm doing good and so is my daughter.  One day I'll say yes to the many that seem to ask me out, just not ready.  Snowbird, use these stories to help you grow.  Don't be hurt or offended, sometimes another persons story can be your blessing.  I didn't want to say anything I don't want to offend the author, it's a story.  I appreciate these types of stories sometimes.  Thank to you Maiko Anna, for being brave to write such a story.  To see Sessy change like this, but he is nothing like a true abuser, he just truly didn't realize what he was doing.  That line when Kagome told him just how strong he really is got me and gave me hope for his future with Kagome and I do hope he will get past his stubborn pride and apologise to her.  I am not making excuses for abusers. Definatley not. I am truly enjoying your story and watching your characters constanly grow and develope.  I can't wait to see what other trouble, dense Hojo stirs up for himself.  That kid is unbelieveably dense and boring on the show and persistant as Kouga, I sometimes wonder if he isn't Kouga's reincarnation. (haha).  I truly love your story I check daily for update!  I hope all have had a Happy Thanksgiving!  Update soon. Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

Good chapter. I can't wait to see Sesshomaru in the city. Aught to be fun. Keep up the good work. -Cat-

Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed so far.  Hope I can keep it up.  Happy Reading.

Very good chapter please update soon

Author's Response: Next one is on the way.  Should be there today.  I am so glad that you have stayed with the story and still like it.  :-)  Happy Turkey day!!!

I'm glad he was able to pass through the well.  He's seeing and learning another side of her and her world.  She's also seeing another side to him.  His jealousy and concern.  But for a short moment, she thought he would hit her.  Just as I thought, you do it once to someone, they don't forget.  You have to verbally and physically let them know you're sorry.   Verbal apologies are easy to make for most people but to prove you mean it, you have to prove it by not even having the feeling to begin with even during an argument.  He's not there yet because of his previous thought to drag her by the hair back through the well.  You don't have violent thoughts about someone you truly care for even if they make you angry.  Violent thoughts eventually lead to violent acts.  I just hope he someday realizes this.  Until then she's foolish to let herself to care for him.  

As you've already guessed, I'm very much opposed to physical and verbal abuse in a relationship.  As a small child, I watched my mother go through it until she divorced my dad.  Most people would not have caught the verbal abuse that Inuyasha gave her at times in the anime. 

loving this story, update again soon... perhaps some of Sesshoumaru's higher intellegence will kick in after the jealous rage and he'll realize the slight rashness of his actions

Author's Response: You never know what will happen once they return to the his time.  Thanks for the review.  Happy reading.

In one swift movement her caught her. - he caught her

“There in the house.” - They're

“No your not - you're

that her body was frail in comparison to him - his

Still fun and entertaining. Must have blown her mind when he showed up.

 Incorrect: Sesshomaru turned and walked from the kitchen followed in toe by Jaken

Correct:

Sesshoumaru turned and walked from the kitchen followed by Jaken.

or

Sesshoumaru turned and walked from the kitchen with Jaken in tow.

Incorrect: Her and Rin were setting 

Correct: She and Rin were setting 

Incorrect: At one point Jaken had scolded her tell her

Correct: At one point Jaken had scolded her telling her 

You also need to use some commas. You have a lot of introductory phrases and parenthetical phrases that need commas.

Story is still very entertaining.

like it very much please update soon