How will Sesshoumaru handle the modern era?

Author's Response: That is going to be my biggest challange thus far.   You will all have to wait and see.  Hope that I am up to the task.  Enjoy!

Awesome story!  I love it and am glad that I ran across it!  It's Sessy and Kagome, there is so much I can say about your story but I have to finish my paper for tomorrow.  It's sad in the beginning, that Kagome was holding onto hope that Yash would choose her, that her self esteem and self worth was that low.  With Yash knowing that she has feelings for her, he took advantage of her kindness and heart as well as took her for granted, well in short kinda strung her like like a jerk would, that kiss was a slap in the face. I am not a Yash hater, but your Yash is most likely how I believe he would act if he could fully have Kikyo back, great job.  Sess, with him is all bout strength, loyalty and honor and I'm glad he is changing towards Kagome, seeing her true worth as a woman and a friend and potetial lover.  To bad Shippou had to grow up, he's so cute! Sess is still cool Sess, and it's just cute to see him forcing himself to change his ways towards her, I know she earned his respect by just being herself but he is seeing that dominance isn't everything and dropping a bit of pride and submitting to what she needs isn't a sign of weakness.  Your story is excellent!  I'm hooked like a good book.  I hope he can go through the well with her, I believe it works with the heart.  How are her friends dealing with what Yash did?  Letting her go like that without a fight?  How is Yash gonna feel when he learns that Kikyos spell is only temporary?  Ohhhh!  I loved the description Sessy gave about Kikyo, I feel the same way, she is just to uppity, full of herself know it all, who betrayed herself, her love and his friends.  She changes sides like most of us girls change our underwear.  Not only that she was fooled so easily by someone she claimed to love and worse, she didn't accept her love for who he was, she wanted him to change.  That was so wrong, I feel the same as Sess about her.  Not bashing her just telling the truth, well, from my point of view.  Anyway, your story is great I can't wait to read more so I hope you update real soon.  I know Kagome's mom is gonna love him, by the way he treats her.  I can't wait for more.  Ohh I'm glad you didn't make your Kagome bow down to him, let her keep herself.  Fiesty and independant! Write on!

Much love

InuAngel

ohoh fingers crossed hope hope hope will he get through???

I have to say that I'm a little surprised at the change in his treatment of her, but then again, honor is important to him.  Her actions during the battle must have made him see her as more than a captive to be used.  Perhaps the beginning of some respect for her?  My previous strong reviews come from the fact that I have always been a very independent female that withstood any form of domination from a male.  My father raised me that way and was proud of my independence.  Like Sesshoumaru, he, too, belived in honor.   Even though I'm not so young anymore, I'm still stubbornly independent and too old to change.  haha.

Author's Response: We all have that streak of stubborn in us so no worries.  Sesshomaru and Kagome have a very different and very special relationsip... a demon lord and a human priestess.... two very opposing sides.  I think that a little friction is warranted, but if there was only friction and no reward I wouldn't have much of a story :-P.  I am glad that you are enjoying and I hope to please in the future.  Happy reading!

Actually, he's been both.  To truly be her lover, though, he needs to apologize for his hair pulling, chaining, humiliating, and slapping.  Otherwise it will merely be the captor enjoying the spoils of the captive.  I can understand her attraction to him and her body's reaction but for me the brutalness would stay in the back of my mind and make me to not completely trust him.  That he would merely use me for awhile and eventually discard me.

Even though I knew there were several chapters to read when I discovered this story tonight, I still reviewed each chapter for the fun of it.

Sorry but to me she's a wimp that evidently likes being slapped.  She even kissed his hand!  I'm very disappointed in her.  I thought she had more of a backbone than that.

Author's Response: This part of the story is ment to illustrate Kagome's unending forgiveness and compassion even for those who mistreat others.  Kagome takes on the bigger challange of trying to see Sesshomaru for who he really is instead of taking him head on. 

Respect is earned, not forced or commanded.  She had a right to slap him.  He took the kiss by force.  Because of who he is does not give him the right.  She better not bow to him.

Yuck!  Why did she let Inuyasha kiss her! She had to know he was just in the woods with Kikyo.  I hope she's not going to be all wimpy and whiny over Inuyasha.  Boring!

how about Brutal Lover hmmmmmm love the story can't wait for more

Author's Response: The combination is definitely enticing.  Thanks for the review.  Hope that you are enjoying.  I am working on the next chapter now.

eek! that's kind of cruel of him don't you think? Chaining her. But you know....you make him behave like his normal self. He's not very ooc and especially since its a pairing that's not supposed to be together you did a good job ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so very much.  I didn't want to stray too far from the characters on this one.  I am glad that Sesshomaru and Kagome are coming together.

I like the beginning of your fic. Seems like Inuyasha is betraying her every chance he gets. And kagome? Well who wouldn't jump at the chance of going with Sesshomaru? I'd tell Kagome to drop Inuyasha like last years news and take the hotter demon......

Great job and onto your next chapter.

Lady Nefertiti.

Wow...Kagome cooked for them and got a compliment. InuYasha never did that unless it was to get ramen or potato chips.

Jaken really knows how to take his own words.....dramatic imp...lol

Author's Response:

I thought that it was an opportunity to actually have Kagome get a compliment on her cooking.  Glad to see that someone noticed.  :-)

I do believe I like the Lord of the West as a brutal beast - no, strike that, I love him that way. Keep it up, this is a great read! Rin is so very cute; I especially loved her spinning in circles; such a Rin-like thing to do.

Author's Response: To be honest I quite like him that way too.  The sexiest thing about Sesshomaru is his unparalleled power and lets be honest who wouldn't want to be at his mercy.  I am glad you like it... it only gets better from here... I hope.