Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:50:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
wait... whaaaa....???
omg you sick people !! lol
this was somethin else.... now i'm just searching for that horsey pick lol woowwww....
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2009 3:05:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
holy shit Keva now that is a twist!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2009 5:51:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow! That is over the top Keva! I totally did a double read to make sure I was reading the same story.... it was very unexpected. Very good... I am sure our most hentai-ish writers from the past and now could not execute such a good plot as this.
Author's Response: HA! HAHA! Got ya! Ya know the story this was based on ended with it being the dude's mom and I thought oh yea this would be awesome as a fanfic and viola there you have it... I have another idea for a stroy with a severe plot twist but I have to decide on who I am going to pair in that one. So we'll see; I want to get a few of my unfinished done before I move on to creating anything new.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2009 4:33:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ewww...spider incest. I must admit, that was not what I expected at the end. But truthfully, I had very little idea what the ending might entail. Creepy...
Well, this story has been so very fun! Can't wait for whatever else you've got hiding in that gleefully twisted head of yours...hehe.
Thanks for the ride! :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 7:23:55 PM Title: Altercation
ack what the heck his spider has control of him?
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 5:17:11 PM Title: Altercation
Wow! I want to see the pic. Where is the link... you tease!!! lol
So, Naraku is going to finish. That was really strange that he had done all that in his sleep.
Author's Response: The pic is at ronlyn.deviantart.com let me know what ya think or I could just email it to you. which ever...
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 12:17:22 PM Title: Altercation
Tasty dream sequence! Makes me wish I didn't love my teeth so much as to have a stud through my own tongue. Hmmm... I don't have to work again until Friday night...LOL. Too bad I don't know any fresky evil sexy body modifiers... your story's making me drool! I am one happy hentai! :) Naraku in pain...pant pant pant...
Post the picture of the Spider's bitch riding her horsey - I for one would love to see it. Hell, I'd love to do a version myself. Should I find myself tempted I will beg permission, of course.
One more day is soooooooo looooooooooong....whine whine... :)
Author's Response: Alrighty I will throw it up. But I must warn you; it is very perverse so view at your own risk.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 12:10:04 PM Title: Interruption
ugh... Sesshoumaru. Oh well - every good story needs its asshole; this great story now has one huge asshole. Keep it up! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2009 6:14:57 PM Title: Interruption
Wow... a slight cameo from Sesshoumaru!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2009 11:25:19 AM Title: Interruption
oooooh Sessy and Naraku know each other this is getting even MORE interesting
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2009 10:33:36 PM Title: Complication
chuckles too cute but damn that abnk gettig his bag stolen sighs well tomorrow then sighs
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2009 7:54:39 PM Title: Complication
Kind of a kinky lolita look...very cute and naughty all at once.
Wow..someone stole his bag? Who would do that?
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2009 7:37:50 PM Title: Complication
Oooh, creepy sexy loli Kagome brat! I wonder what happened to Bankotsu's bag - Kagura's dead (I think) and Kanna's her usual void - who else would do it? Hmmm...complications, indeed.
This chapter reminds me of one of the great axioms of modern female life: Modelling lingerie is torture in and of itself - nothing makes you as self-conscious and aware of (at least my) many flaws! Oh well, if you can manage to play to the right audience, it's not so bad - for example, that merry widow makes your ass look huge, but he's so busy looking at your tits, he doesn't notice anything else.
Sheesh, I gotta big mouth! Say Good Night, Wilderness! Good Night and Great Job! :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2009 7:28:55 PM Title: Infatuation
Ah yes, finally - Kagome can get over her fear of her horsey. At least, until she forgets her littel visualization trick in some new fit of panic. That does tend to happen, hehe.
The image of Kagome stalking her master on his bed is very, very nice - and I couldn't help but laugh at the distaste she showed when having to wear clothes; that description was so on the mark! Once you get used to wearing nothing, the tendency is to stay that way, no? LOL
This story has just been a ton of perverted, kinky fun! Witch - Naraku's holding out on Kagome, well's he's holding out on all of us too...grrrr. XD This has been so much fun!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2009 5:45:57 AM Title: Interpolation
Holy shit...really... she gets to pay back soon! woohoo! *does a happy dance* I look forward to it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2009 2:29:13 AM Title: Interpolation
I can't wait to see a submissive Naraku...
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2009 6:41:00 PM Title: Exhibition
Whoa... Mushin is in on it too now! Getting even better... I am in suspense. Waiting will be painful ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2009 9:37:07 PM Title: Vitiation
Hmmm... I like this chapter very much; very vicious! Now that Kagura is just a smear, where will Naraku get another minion?
And no doubt, the slippery, creepy-crawly pain of being tattooed on one's lateral side is very well described...makes me wonder where you get such well-wrought descriptions... :)
What is Naraku seeking to exorcise from his body to Kagome's? I'll admit - you have my undivided attention for this one!
Keeo it up.
Oh, and thanks for the freaky New Year's wishes. I'm just another freak in the Freak Kingdom and proud of it! :) Here's hoping your own year goes according to your wishes - bonzai!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2009 9:29:51 PM Title: Vitiation
Now you finally thow a bone in... well, I cannot blame you... the plot would end to soon and this Nile would be quite sad.
What was Kagura's piercing needle doing in the room?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2009 9:21:54 PM Title: Castigation
Defiant Kagome... I am curious as to what the tattoo will do.
Date: 01 Jan 2009 4:14:17 AM Title: Castigation
I absolutely love this story, and all of your stories really. You are such a wonderful writer and can honestly say you are definantly not alone. hehe :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 3:53:13 PM Title: Manipulation
Sounds like little Kagome is going to be quite the accomplished bitch. Hmmm... anal weights. Good idea.
I love the image of her sweet face, slack with sleep, handcuffed in dreaming security. I'm such a big softie...:)
Really lovin' this!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 12:14:41 PM Title: Manipulation
being that I have experienced some of the things Kags is now learning to enjoy I agree with Naraku soon she will LOVE her little horsey I know I love mine lol the balls are sweet too and hell if I don't want that swing will have to ask the hubby to make more space in the basemet now the poor man LMAO
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 11:26:32 AM Title: Exertion
Naraku is not as bad as I thought. Maybe it is because I am a freak and have tried it, but walking with anything even like a medium to large plug is not bag (feels good.)
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2008 11:43:39 PM Title: Hallucination
Oh what a contraption! I think I want one for myself. *such a bad girl*