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Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 6:29:07 PM Title: Picnic

Well my friend who's doing "A Mermaids Tale" couldn't do the pose that I was thinking would be cool and she's having a hard time coming up with a picture. She says none of them come out right. I would be more than thrilled to put up two pictures for the story. :) So if you'd like to do a picture for that story as well feel free to! :) In it Kagome is the mermaid, not Inuyasha. :) The pose I was thinking of was with Inuyasha sitting on the beach no far from the water with Kagome in his lap and arms. She would be in her mermaid form, tail and all, being held by him across his lap. Novivi said she couldn't get the pose to work, but maybe you can. :) If you draw a picture for "A Mermaids Tale" I'll definitely post it along with whatever Novivi comes up with! Get creative! :)

Author's Response:

Alright I will! I've read the first chapter and I do like it so far. :D I shall read the rest tomorrow and review on IY-Fiction about the art piece. :)

Nice talking to you again Dana! :D

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:19:31 PM Title: Picnic

I understand you not wanting to take sides on the whole ED issue. Personally I would never ask you or anyone else to take sides with that. I have supporters as well as people who think I'm a plagarist, but I never would ask anyone to take sides. It's been almost two years since the first time I was accused so it's kind of ancient history at this point. All I can do is claim my innocence. I can't force anyone to believe me and I wouldn't want my friends, fans, or anyone else to get caught up in this mess by taking sides. I don't know what the author of the story I'm accused of copying thinks, but we were friends before all this went down and I have absolutely no hard feelings towards her. InuGrrrl and I, as well as her mod InuHanyouNikki, don't get along for obvious reasons, but I don't have any ill will towards them or anyone else. I'm more hurt by the accusation than anything (though I'll admit I'm angry too, but mostly hurt). Unfortunately I know that this whole situation is why my site was hacked into and destroyed last year. Though I have no actual proof of who did it, there's circumstantial evidence and I'm not stupid. I don't want anyone to get tangled in this web though so I'd never ask you to take sides. :) I'm sure you, as everyone else, has their opinion, but I can understand not wanting to voice that opinion. My advice is to stay neutral. That's the best option in this situation. As for the pictures sure if you want to do "Victim" over again and have the time go for it! If not you can do a picture for any of my stories except for "A Mermaids Tale" (My friend Novivi is already working on a picture for that story) and Open Your Heart to Me (Again Novivi already did a picture for that one). The other large story that I'm working on right now is "A Stolen Heart". Maybe you can come up with something for that one. All my other stories that don't have pictures are either short stories or complete. You can do a picture for any story that tickles your fancy though. :) Just let me know which one you decided to do a picture of, if any, so that if another friend of mine asks to draw a picture for one of my stories I can tell them that someone is already making a picture for a certain story. :) Can't wait to see more of your work!

Author's Response:

Yea, I understand completely. ^^ Glad that it's a past you for the moment. :)

'A Mermaids Tale' caught my eye, but it looks like that story is already taken. XD Maybe you could fit two pictures in? ;) I'll check out the other stories too, I've just drawn a mermaid Kagome with InuYasha pretty recently, so I thought I would do it again. Unless InuYasha is the mermaid. :O XD

Thanks, *hug* I hope to get my stories updated, because there will be more lemons in 'Eyes to Life'! :D

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:28:20 PM Title: Picnic

I haven't posted on because I've been told (though I'm not sure that it's true) that they don't allow such detailed lemons, and my lemons get pretty detailed. Though I was released on Christmas Eve 2009 I didn't actually ENJOY Christmas. I was still very sick and recovering. I still couldn't walk. I was just out of the hospital, but I was still ill. This year I didn't enjoy it either because my mom died in July and it was my first Christmas without her. I cried and cried like a baby all through Christmas. If you ever want to do the picture for "Victim" over again you're more than welcomed to! Your decision! :) On ED "Victim" wasn't what I was accused of plagiarising and through conversations with mods at AFF it wasn't what they thought was plagairised either. The mod that said it was that story made a mistake. It was a different story, but some people still think it was "Victim". Either way if stupid people want to think I did something like that it's on them. Personally as you know I'm a diehard Inu/Kag lover. I was surprised when I saw that there was an Inu/Sango pairing about a year ago. I was like What?! LOL :) I think it's an odd pairing. Though I have to admit it's an interesting thought. I saw one community on LJ committed to the Inu/Sango pairing. Though I personally can't see it ever really working I do think it's an interesting pairing. I can't get into it myself, but a hanyou and demon slayer sounds pretty cool. :) I can't help but love Inu/Kag though. I just can't see Sess/Kag ever working either. That's the most popular pairing on the internet. I just can't see it EVER happening. Oh well. And yeah it feels good to lose all of that weight. When I look in the mirror I can't believe how small I am compared to what I was a year ago. It's amazing really. :) Whenever you post a new story let me know! I'd love to read it!

Author's Response:

Well...I've seen pretty detailed lemons there already, mainly yaoi lemons. (And no I don't read yaoi, I accidently read one XP). All my stories are on there and I haven't been even told to take them down. There are actually some stories on there that have even worse lemons then yours if you can believe it. XD

I'm sorry about your mom. :( I don't have any more grandparents, but both of my parents are in their 70's. My wife has lost her father when she was a teenager, so I understand your sorrow.

I would love to redo the picture, but I might not have time. I might draw a picture for one of your new stories when I get the time. Any one in particular you would like me to draw for? :) Yeah, sounds like a whole ball of confusion over the plagiarizing. I just wish it really didn't happen at all, since I don't want to accuse either side of being wrong. I am your friend, but I'm also pretty well known over on ED. So I'll just stay neutral and hope whatever happened was a mistake. ^^;

Yea, the Inu/San story I plan to write is extremely DARK. It's not really "romance", you're going to hate InuYasha in this fiction. XD I also have three Inu/Kag fictions on the way. One still needs a title, the other will be another dark fic (I like dark themes can't you tell? XD), and another will be an AU...InuYasha in place of Star Trek! :D Sort of, I'm shoving my own ideas as well mixing some of Star Treks ideas as well. I will not allow the Tribbles to escape! :) It won't be a crossover, just InuYasha as Kirk and Sesshomaru as Spock...etc. It will be LONG that's all I know. XD

Yea, Sess/Kag is EXTREMELY popular. Not just in fan-fiction, but also in fan-art. There are so many really great artists drawing this pairing its making me want to stand up and say enough. But I know fandom is fandom, people have different views and I have to respect that. Sess/Kag is just getting on my nerves, I've just come down to one conclusion on it, it's a fan-girls way of not self-inserting herself with Sesshomaru, she just uses Kagome instead. :|

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:40:36 PM Title: Picnic

You don't sound like you have no heart to me! :) Maybe part of my obesity is genetic since both of my parents are overweight, but I wasn't overweight until about two or three years ago. I was fine, but then I got very sick with my thyroid and pseudo cushings. Last year I almost died and was put in the hospital for six weeks. I was very sick and gained weight due to illness, not diet. I was barely eating. There was no reason for me (diet wise) to gain all that weight. I went from 140lbs to 410lbs in a year. Literally! I remember one week I gained 40lbs. IN ONE WEEK!! The docs said that wasn't possible to do just by eat. That I'd have to be eating 24/7 in order to accomplish such a thing. So my obesity was due to illness. Since recovering from said illness though I've lost 200lbs. I was released from the hospital on Dec 24 2009. Since then I've lost 200lbs. So now I'm about 210. I'm still overweight, but much better than I was. Before I couldn't walk 2 steps without collapsing. I literally couldn't even sit up without at least 2 people helping me to. Now I'm much MUCH better! :) I was very close to death. The obesity was just a symptom of my illness, not the cause. Anyway's I absolutely love your hentai piece! It's great! It totally sucks that someone stole your artwork. I've had one of my stories plagarized and have been falsely accused of plagairism so I know how it feels. Either way I hope to see more work from you soon! And I hope you write more stories! You're an awesome writer as well as artist!! :)


Author's Response: Oh, yea that is strange, forty pounds in a week? That's not normal at all. :O Yea, usually when your parents are overweight it sort reflects you genetically. My father has type one diabetes as do I. That's good you lost half of your weight, 210 sounds much better than before. You were released just on Christmas Eve, glad you were able to enjoy last year’s Christmas and this one as well. :D Glad you like it. If I could redo the 'Hanyou Detective' piece for your story it would look SO much better now. I've learned Photoshop and Manga Studio, so my art has gotten so much better. My writing needs a little more shove though, I officially got my first flames on and they accused me of not being a native English speaker. Well excuse me...>> You should go post your stories there, there are lots of InuYasha fans that would love your stories. :D I just wouldn't post 'Detective' do to all the controversies around it. I would agree that you didn't plagiarize, but I haven't seen the entire story, so yeah. I feel for the mistake, I wish you weren't kicked of ED, it’s a great site. :( Thank you! You’re also a great Inu/Kag writer! :D Also, since my absence, I officially hate the Sess/Kag pairing. I've sort of started an Anti-Sess/Kag movement on DA a little since its over-popular presence on the art site. XD So yeah...though I have just started to like the InuYasha/Sango pairing and plan to write a story on it...Sorry! XD I'm still an Inu/Kag fan at heart, I'm just expanding my horizons just a little. *blush*


Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:15:40 PM Title: Picnic

Unfortunately when I had surgery at the end of November of 2010 I DID run into complications. First I had tacnicardia the day after surgery (fast heartbeat) and then less than a week after the surgery I started to get a fever. Within a couple of days I had a 104 fever and my oxygen level was way too low. They thought I had a blood clot in my lungs, but luckily I didn't. According to the test they ran it seems that the fever was due to something viral, not surgical. Either way getting a fever like that after major surgery is never good. Had to have my gall bladder removed. Anyway's I recovered. :) Heehee YAY! :) Now I'm doing okay. I'm still throwing up, but not as much as before. I'm the type of person where Murphy's Law is always applied. Today my neighbor actually said something that I totally agree with. As you know Murphy's Law is "Anything that can go wrong will." She said "Murphy was an optimist." LOL! I so totally agree with that! Anyway, enough about me! Did you do anything special or fun during vacation? I have a lot of new stories for you to catch up on if you've been away that long. I hope that you'll let me know what you think of them. And I hope that you post some of your new artwork on Inuyasha-Fiction. I'd love to see it! You're such an amazing artist! :) Anything Inu/Kag related that you've drawn recently? I'd love to take a look at it! :)

Author's Response:

Oh dear. :( That's horrible. What's exactly causing all that? I know you told me you were...(I don't want to sound rude XD), overweight. Is that genetics or is I sound like I have no heart. I'm sorry. XD I'm glad you're feeling better now, I caught a nasty cold back in October, but I'm good now. :)

Yea, actually here...: You'll like it! *laughs* XD Oh man, that is my first ever Inu/Kag hentai art piece! XP XD I shall go see about your stories, I'm sure there are plenty of lemons to be read...:D Lol! Yea..posting my art on IY-Fiction means putting it on Photobucket, and I've had two art pieces stolen from there. :| So I won't be posting my art there anymore, but you can view it all on my Deviantart page. :)

I shall go read your stories now, or when I have the time. :) I'm still at work right now...>>

Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 1:59:54 PM Title: Picnic

Where the heck have you been! I left this review almost a year ago! LOL! :) How are the twins and the Mrs? I hope that you've been keeping up with my stories on the other site. :) Anyway's, try to stay in touch more often! Give the boys a kiss for me! :) 

Author's Response:

Ugh! I'm so sorry! XC I disappeared on DA and really been sucked into drawing and doing art. XD We're fine, I just think the only thing not fine is my wallet. XP I just now went on InuYasha-Fiction today. I haven't been writing anything for the past few months due to hiatus and life. I just now got OFF of vacation, and I still couldn't write a dang chapter on any of my stories! XD

I was reading 'Slave' for a while, than I stopped reading fan-fiction all together for a time. I'm like that. :O I'm just responding to all of my reviews on all the sites I have my stories on. XD Yours was one of them.

Glad you're doing okay, nothing complicated with an surgeries I hope. :) Yea, I'll go check on you back on IF, but I just need to get caught up on months of not writing! XD

Reviewer: inuyasha_rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 8:51:04 PM Title: Epilogue

very good fanfic!!  :D  :D  :D  :D  love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was my first one actually. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed. :D

Reviewer: Nebula Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:00:02 PM Title: Picnic

hmm thought I posted a review here... anyway this was one awesome story :D

Author's Response: Oh wow, you read through this entire thing? -_-' I wish I could go back and rewrite it, there is so many mistakes! XD Glad you liked it, Healing Soul is the pullout of this story if you wish to read that. I think its the better story of the two, but oh well, don't have the time to go back and clean up, so its stuck the way it is. XD

Reviewer: cyphon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2009 10:33:50 AM Title: Epilogue

I really liked your story. Isn't this also on IK Eternal?

Author's Response: Yea, its only to chapter 22 though.. it takes me a little longer to update there. But yea its on IK Eternal! :)

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2009 7:19:07 AM Title: Epilogue

i'm already reading the other two. you probably found that out though, because i leave comments on both. and what a yaoi?

Author's Response:

You like fanfic's dont yea? :D I'll update them as soon as I can. Oh, yaoi is romance between two men, I don't read it nor do I write it *Throws up in trash can* XP I'm just saying if anyone wants to use my OC character Inuhidoi they can, if they use him for yaoi, I don't want to know. I'll update for when I can so you can enjoysome more! :D

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2009 9:03:58 PM Title: Epilogue

I love this story and the ending is just so sweet. I hope that you continue to write, because your very good.

Author's Response: Sure will! I have two stories currently and I have an AU story on the way! :)

Reviewer: Lorisa45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2009 10:49:38 PM Title: Epilogue

This was awesome thank you for creating this awesome story! It was one of the best piece of fanfiction I have ever read!

Author's Response: Your very welcome! :) I know many people don't want great works to finish, but it had to happen. I have two other stories and I will start a AU (It will be a 100 chapters at least!) soon! So thats coming soon! :) Glad you enjoyed! :D

Reviewer: Lorisa45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2009 12:02:07 PM Title: Afterwards

I hope you do update soon!!!! I can already tell this story is coming to a close.  This has been one of the most awesomenest stories I have ever read!!!  I hope your other stories will be as fantastic as this one!!!! Till then bye bye!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2009 4:10:04 PM Title: Afterwards

please continue, and how far will the epilogue be, as in how many chapters?

Author's Response: My epilogue is one chapter, like most, it will be a long one, but it will be the last chapter. I'm glad you've taken the time to read and review my story, all I can say now, is enjoy the ending once its up! :)

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2009 11:55:39 PM Title: Afterwards

I love Kagome's mom she just has this way of making everything seem okay. Another great chapter and I can't wait for the ending.

Author's Response: Yea, I always see Kagome's mother as a person who can make everything right with just her words, and don't worry I'll have the last chapter up very soon! :)

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2009 3:41:32 PM Title: Inu Soul

please continue.

Author's Response: Yep. :)

Reviewer: Lorisa45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2009 8:11:12 PM Title: Inu Soul

OMG!!!!!!! Dang that was awesome!!!!!!!  Please Please Please Update Soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yep, the big KAPOW action scene! Didn't quiet turn out the way I hoped, but it works. :) I will...but I hate to inform you it's about over. :'( *sniff* I still have my other two stories, as soon as this one is done, and will start a AU when Modern is done as well. I'll update as soon as I can! :)

Reviewer: Dark_Author Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2009 2:37:37 PM Title: Hurt

You really like cliffhangers, don't you?  Eh, I can't complain...I used them, too.  They work.  I am loving this story so've done a wonderful job with the characters personalities, and it certainly keeps the reader engaged in the story.  Off to the next chapter I go...

By the way, have a 10.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love cliffhangers, like I said before, I'm the cliffhanger king! There good, as long as you don't have the person wait to long and then they get angry. :) I haven't seen you in a while, your two stories are great! :) Well I hope you continue to enjoy! :)

Reviewer: Dark_Author Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2009 2:32:25 PM Title: Scratches


Author's Response: Lol! Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2009 3:02:59 AM Title: Inu Soul

Great chapter I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Sure thing! Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Lorisa45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2009 9:36:00 PM Title: Together

Dang please finish this I'm on the edge of my seat!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'll try to update tonight or tomorrow! I promise!

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2009 3:01:02 PM Title: Together

please continue, i'm dying to know if they can bring Inuyasha back or not.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! I'll update hopefully update in the next few days! :D Until then!

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2009 12:42:30 AM Title: Together

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'll try not to have you wait to long! :) It will be the longest chapter, and probably the most action packed as well, but that's all I'm going to say, until then! :)

Reviewer: Lorisa45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2009 4:30:38 PM Title: Spirit

Dang! Keep upating Please Please Please!!! Definitly Awesome!!!

Author's Response: I will, I promise! :) It's just I'm tackling interent problems with the computer my stories are saved to, so I'm using a flash drive, and my laptop is very picky. I will update whne I get the chance, I also will have a fanart picture, hopefully, posted for one of my stories. Until then! :)

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2009 11:52:22 PM Title: Spirit

Another great chapter keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Glad your enjoying it! :) I'll update soon, even though my internet is down. Until next time! :)

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