I am so glad that I paid some attention to my email when someone asked about your story.  I had the pleasure of reading your story!  The one thing I regret is not being able to read it when it was going through its creation stages by you.  You know, chapt. by chapt.  I really love the OOc of Sesshomaru because if I had to write him in a story, it would be mostly OOc.  I love the way you made Kagome a woman of strength. Making Souta the elder Bro was wonderful.  I adore the way you made every angst situation full of emotion that at some point it had me in tears Especially Sango's demise.  I love it when authors make me cry.  Understand, I'm not at all gloomy, I just like to feel or get into your characters.  The way you told this story, in my opinion captured the beautiful everyday life of this reservation that will always be remembered by me because you made me feel like I was there.  Truly I enjoyed this story and I'm looking forward to reading more of you works.  Peace!