Date: 15 Dec 2009 6:01:01 PM Title: Scroll 20
Some may see "your" Sess as OOC, but all things taken into account, I see it as pretty close to accurate. After all, we've seen the "ice lord" grow up quite a bit thanks, I think, to Rin's influence! I totally hated him early on in the anime series, but I've come to like him these days. Especially after Rin's almost death in Final Act. Looking forward to the coming chapters greatly! Has me thinking of all kinds of ideas for my own stories, which I owe you for since my muse has been hiding away for a while now! Thanks again for the story, and keep up the good work!
Thanks, I have a hard time with Sesshomaru's character for a lot of reasons, but Sesshomaru in battle was a pretty hard role to write him in. In the anime and manga, I had to go watch a few more episodes and read a little more to get his character as accurate in battle as possible. But do to the fact that InuYasha's human group was there in the way, I could see him getting a 'little' frustrated over the matter.
I don't mind Sesshomaru, its all the fans and the horrible things they have done to him I don't particular enjoy. (The Sess/Kag pairing for instance). I'll shall update as soon as I can! Trying to finish 'Modern Hanyou' and start on my next one as soon as I close my polls on ff.net. If your interested, (and if you have a ff.net account) you can vote for the next story I should start! :D
Good luck on your story ideas, and I hope to update very soon! ;D
Date: 15 Dec 2009 5:33:38 PM Title: Scroll 19
I'm not terribly good at writing reviews, so be patient with me. I have to say, this has been the best chapter so far, and there have been some goodies! Thanks for the great story. Oh, and I've enjoyed having little Rin along for the journey! lol
That's all right, I'll be patient for you. :) Yes, this chapter pulls us into a three chapter action scene, (which I was trying to squeeze into two chapters -_-').
Glad you are enjoying! :) I need Rin for a few things, and she has a big role in one chapter a little later. :)
Date: 07 Jul 2009 10:36:19 PM Title: Scroll 14
Okay what's going to happen now and I can't believe Inuyasha and Kouga didn't try to beat the crrap out of each other.
Author's Response: Ohhh trust me they did! Only Kagome interefered and neither one of them wanted to hurt her. And besides Kagome could 'sit' InuYasha, and Kouga would do anything for Kagome, but don't worry. Kouga does come back! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2009 2:15:04 AM Title: Scroll 13
Very good I just think that someone should have explained to Kagome about mating rituals.
Author's Response: Yep, Kagome really didn't know about mating rituals and so she acted to defend both of them. Personally, I don't hate Kouga, and I didn't want him dying, so Kagome was the resulting factor to stop the death match between the two. I have other plans for Kouga, and InuYasha will it explain through her thick skull later. ;) I'll update soon! :)
Date: 27 Jun 2009 6:09:41 PM Title: Scroll 12
OMG, I can't wait for the fight between Inuyasha and Koga, I'm really not a big fan of his, and hope that Inuyasha beats the crap out of him. On a lighter note, another great chapter and I can't wait for the next one. You did a great job with Shippo's comedic relief in this chapter, when things started to get a little tense.
Author's Response: Oh yes, InuYasha and Kouga are eyeing each other like cold fire! I don't hate Kouga personally, but Kagome belongs with InuYasha, so they will fight. Yea, I didn't mention Shippo recently, so I thought it was cute way to bring his character back in. :) I hopefully will update soon, with all the fanart I have, it might be a few days, but I'll get it up soon! I promise! :)
Date: 27 Jun 2009 3:51:51 PM Title: Scroll 12
First off really good story, but there was no corn in Japan 500 years ago. Corn is a new world food and did not get to Europe till after Colombus (it got to Japan even later). Even today there is almost no fresh corn in Japan, it is almost all imported from the U.S. Sorry to nitpick but the corn thing sort of threw me off of the story for a momen. Anyway great story hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Ohh...tell you the truth, I had no idea that was true. I'm a math person, my history is bad, I'm glad you pointed it out. I live in the US and have never left, so I have no idea what grows over there! XD Of course I could look it up, but the reason was becasue I was eating corn when I typed up the chapter, so I just put it in without thinking. I'll see if I can just change it to something else. Both times you reviewd you've pointed out little problems, I'm going start calling you my little history beta here! XD Thanks for the heads up, and I hopefully will update soon! :D
Date: 24 Jun 2009 2:51:06 PM Title: Scroll 11
I'm begining to wonder if Inuyasha's youkai form came from this youkai that only he can see/sense, at least it would make sense of why no one else can do anything about it.
Author's Response: Hmmm...well, I have plans for the 'youkai', you'll see. InuYasha's form came from something related to the 'youkai', but you'll just have to wait and find out, I don't want to spoil it for you! ;) You'll like the next chapter...hint, hint, Kouga enters the scene. X)
Date: 07 Jun 2009 6:59:58 PM Title: Scroll 10
Dang what's going on now got to find out please update soon!
Author's Response: Well, I got a busy work week this week, and the next chapter has a lot of stuff in it, it might be a few days, but I'll get it up I promise! :)
Date: 06 Jun 2009 10:16:51 PM Title: Scroll 10
Oh a cliffie. Just what we needed, when we want some answers. Aren't you such a nice person. Anyway its a very good story, writing style is good, and has defined plot :) happy day, happy day
Author's Response: I'm a cliffhanger addict! Can't stop using them! XD hopefully the next chapter will be up in a few days, so until then! :)
Date: 21 May 2009 10:14:24 PM Title: Scroll 7
please continue, i love this story, i would love to know how everyone reacts to inuyasha being a full youkai. i bet sesshomaru's reaction would be the funniest.
Author's Response: I'm getting there! I promise this will continue, I've just ran into a few bumps with this fic, since I have so many different ideas for it, and one path would have me rate this X, not going to happen hopefully, I'll see if I can start it back up after Brokan is done and Modern is close to complete! I promise I won't leave this story unfinished! :)
Date: 09 May 2009 10:55:25 PM Title: Scroll 7
What the !!!!!!!! What is happening to Inuyasha dang I really got to find out what happens next!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yea, it might seem simliar to Broken Soul since there are some connections, but InuYasha is not possessed, I'll try to update soon, My job had been keeping me and I found another fanfic website I'm going to post there too, but I'll get to it as fast as I can! :)
Date: 06 May 2009 11:27:44 PM Title: Scroll 7
I like it, another great chapter. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Well, I hope InuYasha's worries kind of foreshadowed what might happen. I'll update when I can! :)