~~~I.GIVE.A.BIG.BRAVO.TO.THIS.AUTHOR.~~~

You had the story well written with a nice plot. You wrote a lemon, but the thing that struck me was that you gave a warning, which most authors dont, and I thank you for that. I like how you looked up...*cough*clothes*cough*, that the characters wore. That shows dedication, and it all paid off. Sesshomaru was out of character, but you made it work out as if he is normaly like that. And finally you left flashbacks of the previous chapters, that again most authors (including me) don't think of. You are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your fanfictions.

omg i love this story you have to keep updateing more chapters